Victor
An anapestic poem for Potlatch Poetry26 total reviews
Comment from Miss Sherry
This little guy is SO cute. You have given him life and a real personality. I can see him on a park bench just like a little old man, remembering his heyday. I like this very much and I wish you the best of luck in the competition. Great job!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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This little guy is SO cute. You have given him life and a real personality. I can see him on a park bench just like a little old man, remembering his heyday. I like this very much and I wish you the best of luck in the competition. Great job!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Thank you for a great review.
Comment from meeshu
I like the story of the happy aardvark on his last journey to the 'Great Mound'. it is heartwarming and a lot of ants will live to see another day. great, Yvonne....................meeshu
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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I like the story of the happy aardvark on his last journey to the 'Great Mound'. it is heartwarming and a lot of ants will live to see another day. great, Yvonne....................meeshu
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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LOL. I hadn't thought of that. The ant world will be glad there's one less aardvark. Thank you for a delightful review.
Comment from Christine C Autry
This poem was so good. I enjoyed reading it. It was creative and fun. Something you do not hear about too much is an aardvark. But I liked it a lot. Thank You for sharing this.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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This poem was so good. I enjoyed reading it. It was creative and fun. Something you do not hear about too much is an aardvark. But I liked it a lot. Thank You for sharing this.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank YOU for this great review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
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You are Welcome
Comment from kiwijenny
This is a cute cute aardvark ...why the two aa's Anyway he needs to meet a llama ...two lls
Sorry I'm adhd...and I Squirrel about a lot../
This is a great poem...
God bless
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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This is a cute cute aardvark ...why the two aa's Anyway he needs to meet a llama ...two lls
Sorry I'm adhd...and I Squirrel about a lot../
This is a great poem...
God bless
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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I wonder about those double letters, too, and what the use of them is. lol. Thank you for a delightful review.
Comment from BeasPeas
You have done an outstanding job with this wonderful poem, Yvonne. Talented lady. I liked it very much. I didn't know aardvarks lived so long. Story telling and composition are great. Marilyn
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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You have done an outstanding job with this wonderful poem, Yvonne. Talented lady. I liked it very much. I didn't know aardvarks lived so long. Story telling and composition are great. Marilyn
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Marilyn. I didn't know they lived that long, either, until I looked them up. Amazing. Must be all that protein they get from the ants. lol
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Some creatures are fascinating.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a fun read, Yvonne, done in great meter and rhyme. I loved reading your story about Victor. Great job with the rhymes, the meter, touches of alliteration, a fun storyline, the perfect picture, and your well-chosen words, of course. Your words create super imagery--I could 'see' everything you wrote. Thanks for sharing a great example of a poem in anapestic meter that was a joy to read. Jan
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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What a fun read, Yvonne, done in great meter and rhyme. I loved reading your story about Victor. Great job with the rhymes, the meter, touches of alliteration, a fun storyline, the perfect picture, and your well-chosen words, of course. Your words create super imagery--I could 'see' everything you wrote. Thanks for sharing a great example of a poem in anapestic meter that was a joy to read. Jan
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Awww, thank YOU for a wonderful review! I'm so happy you like it and enjoyed reading it.
