All Feathered Friends Are Welcome
A poem for bird lovers24 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adore our feathered friends and they are a delight to watch and listen to! If they choose to make a home in your garden then you are lucky, I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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I adore our feathered friends and they are a delight to watch and listen to! If they choose to make a home in your garden then you are lucky, I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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I am very lucky, even now in winter as they flock to my feeder. Many thanks, Dolly, for sharing my poem. I am delighted you enjoyed it.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I love the artwork, and the
presentation is very nice.
-The poem is written well
with effective imagery, and
a good repeating line.
-You convey a love of the
feathered friends that come your way:
"while building nests with joyful cheer
within my trees--such artistry!"
-I like the concluding verse, too.
-A very good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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-I love the artwork, and the
presentation is very nice.
-The poem is written well
with effective imagery, and
a good repeating line.
-You convey a love of the
feathered friends that come your way:
"while building nests with joyful cheer
within my trees--such artistry!"
-I like the concluding verse, too.
-A very good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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I am delighted you enjoyed ALL FEATHERED FRIENDS, Pam, and truly appreciate your kind praise. I did fix the spelling in my title. Thanks for the heads-up.
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You are very welcome. I did enjoy "Feathered Friends" very much. Loved the painting, too.
Comment from Debra White
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This is lovely. Beautiful rhyme and meter and excellent use of enjambment makes this a smooth and enjoyable read.
Great imagery and nice touches of alliteration also.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Kind regards, Debra
Ps. The d is missing from feathered in your title...
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Hello ð???
This is lovely. Beautiful rhyme and meter and excellent use of enjambment makes this a smooth and enjoyable read.
Great imagery and nice touches of alliteration also.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Kind regards, Debra
Ps. The d is missing from feathered in your title...
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much, Debra, for sharing ALL FEATHERED FRIENDS and your kind praise. I did fix the title.
Comment from royowen
A beautiful written kirielle my friend, as an entry in this Kirielle contest, I lie the repeated line in each of your stanzas which sets the theme for the whole poem. Beautfully fully written in a smooth even rhyme, set by an articulte meter, and an immaculate abab rhyme scheme, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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A beautiful written kirielle my friend, as an entry in this Kirielle contest, I lie the repeated line in each of your stanzas which sets the theme for the whole poem. Beautfully fully written in a smooth even rhyme, set by an articulte meter, and an immaculate abab rhyme scheme, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much, Roy> I am delighted you like the imagery and poetic devices used in ALL FEATHERED FRIENDS.
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Well done
