Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

thank you for sharing your song lyrics. The piece is well structured and I could imagine the verses and refrain working well together. Did you think about entering this in the lyrics contest? Its listed under 'Brett West song lyrics.'

I think you can contact Tom to help you make it a contest entry,

~patty~

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 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday. Thanks for the tip.