Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "haiku (sunflowers soak)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
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Comment from Rasmine
Gypsy, :)
I love sunflower seeds. Now I am craving! :P LOL!
I don't think I did mine right; I added animals to the scene, so maybe I shouldn't have included it?
Have a great week!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Gypsy, :)
I love sunflower seeds. Now I am craving! :P LOL!
I don't think I did mine right; I added animals to the scene, so maybe I shouldn't have included it?
Have a great week!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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It's about flowers but it's okay to add animals. Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sis Cat
Gypsy, this is a fine summer Haiku that is concrete, vivid. You also use S alliteration. The satori evokes the sense of taste. Poem reminds me of Van Gogh's sunflowers painting.
Thank you for sharing your talents.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Gypsy, this is a fine summer Haiku that is concrete, vivid. You also use S alliteration. The satori evokes the sense of taste. Poem reminds me of Van Gogh's sunflowers painting.
Thank you for sharing your talents.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
Just talented!
You've penned this Haiku with a syllable count of 4-5-2
Sunflowers are beautiful.
The image shown supports the poem. The color of background goes well with the picture and color of font chosen.
Thanks for sharing another Haiku with us.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Just talented!
You've penned this Haiku with a syllable count of 4-5-2
Sunflowers are beautiful.
The image shown supports the poem. The color of background goes well with the picture and color of font chosen.
Thanks for sharing another Haiku with us.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 23-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Ulla
Hola Guapa, this is a lovely haiku depicting the image of a sunflower field bowing their heads to the sun. I loved the satori line. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Hola Guapa, this is a lovely haiku depicting the image of a sunflower field bowing their heads to the sun. I loved the satori line. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
Comment Written 23-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Hola guapa
Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku. First, love sunflowers. They seem to represent the sun and they soak up each sunray they can while in the fields on earth.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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A very well-written haiku. First, love sunflowers. They seem to represent the sun and they soak up each sunray they can while in the fields on earth.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written Haiku. I think that the flow is amazing and alliteration is great throughout. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are very talented. God bless you. With love, Lola
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2017
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Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written Haiku. I think that the flow is amazing and alliteration is great throughout. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are very talented. God bless you. With love, Lola
Comment Written 23-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend Lola
Comment from Heather Knight
I see you haven't lost your Spanish identity. I don't think anybody else would see a snack when looking at a sunflower...
Lovely poem and great presentation.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2017
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I see you haven't lost your Spanish identity. I don't think anybody else would see a snack when looking at a sunflower...
Lovely poem and great presentation.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Maria Jose, I appreciate your warm and kind review.
gypsy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was really good, I love sunflower seeds and eat them as snacks or sprinkle them on my salads. Beautiful picture too. Well done, Gypsy, you met this flower challenge beautifully. :) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2017
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That was really good, I love sunflower seeds and eat them as snacks or sprinkle them on my salads. Beautiful picture too. Well done, Gypsy, you met this flower challenge beautifully. :) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Sandra, I appreciate your warm and kind review.
gypsy
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This one is perfect and so true. My ex and I discussed the fields of sunflowers that he has never seen and said I was lying. Your imagery and then the warm snacks...for us later and the birds then.lol
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2017
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This one is perfect and so true. My ex and I discussed the fields of sunflowers that he has never seen and said I was lying. Your imagery and then the warm snacks...for us later and the birds then.lol
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Barb, I appreciate your warm and kind review.
gypsy
