Soft Paradise
A blind man's second chance at sight.44 total reviews
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
A beautiful poem whose imagery journeys through each line.
A wonderful flow throughout with some lovely lines tells a touching story.
The words married with a fantastic picture made this a pleasure to read.
Have a lovely day
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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A beautiful poem whose imagery journeys through each line.
A wonderful flow throughout with some lovely lines tells a touching story.
The words married with a fantastic picture made this a pleasure to read.
Have a lovely day
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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HI YNWA, thank you so much for a great review my friend...I am so glad you like it...you have a lovely evening...love Audrey...Linda xxoo
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Well cultivated thought, observation is expressed for a sight appreciation; environmental match is soothing, blind man's second chance of sight is dramatically exposed.
I liked and enjoyed rhymes, the metaphoric soft paradise and a free flow of thoughts.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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Well cultivated thought, observation is expressed for a sight appreciation; environmental match is soothing, blind man's second chance of sight is dramatically exposed.
I liked and enjoyed rhymes, the metaphoric soft paradise and a free flow of thoughts.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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HI Alcreater, thank you very much my friend for a great review...I am so glad you like it...love Audrey...Linda xxoo
Comment from Gloria ....
Such a beautiful soul you are, Linda to present a poem written by a beloved friend. The imagery is vivid and concrete in this enlightening poem. It's as if I am there and can feel the cold grass-filled plains, and misty rain falling about the lamp pole on a street at night.
This is gorgeous so thank you for sharing.
Love you dear one.
Gloria
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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Such a beautiful soul you are, Linda to present a poem written by a beloved friend. The imagery is vivid and concrete in this enlightening poem. It's as if I am there and can feel the cold grass-filled plains, and misty rain falling about the lamp pole on a street at night.
This is gorgeous so thank you for sharing.
Love you dear one.
Gloria
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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HI Sweeter, thank you my sweet friend for a awesome review...made Audrey smile...so good to see you angel...sooooooo miss you...please take care...love you too...Love Audrey...and Linda xxoo..
Comment from nuthead
Such a beautiful image, both the black and white photograph and descriptive, image-packed words.
The love imagery describing the misty rain around the lamp post light softening everything just right. Great intro.
Cool the way your closing stanza almost mirrored the first, bringing us back to that stunning intro.
Love this visual:
He kisses the sky
Very nice.
Enjoyed reading this lovely poem.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Such a beautiful image, both the black and white photograph and descriptive, image-packed words.
The love imagery describing the misty rain around the lamp post light softening everything just right. Great intro.
Cool the way your closing stanza almost mirrored the first, bringing us back to that stunning intro.
Love this visual:
He kisses the sky
Very nice.
Enjoyed reading this lovely poem.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Hi Shirley, thank you so very much for a great review...my girlfriends daughter wrote the poem and took the picture...she is sooooo very talented...so glad you like it... love Audrey...xxoo Linda
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very nicely penned poem by your friend's daughter. She is also a fine photographer. The poem has good word choices, is descriptive and rhymes or near-rhymes well. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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This is a very nicely penned poem by your friend's daughter. She is also a fine photographer. The poem has good word choices, is descriptive and rhymes or near-rhymes well. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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HI Marilyn, thank you my friend for a great review...she is truly very talented...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo and Audrey
Comment from rjuselius
whoa - they don't come much deeper than this dear linda! i love the analogy of the blind man and his undying wish to see once again. it breaks my heart.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
virtual six!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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whoa - they don't come much deeper than this dear linda! i love the analogy of the blind man and his undying wish to see once again. it breaks my heart.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
virtual six!
rebekka x
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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HI Rebekka, thank you so much for your virtual six...my girlfriends daughter wrote it...and took the picture...she has multi talents...Blessings to you as well...and have a wonderful day...love Audrey....xxoo Linda
Comment from MelB
Hi Linda, so nice to see a post from you! This is a beautiful picture and poem to go with it. Very nice rhyme and it flows well. Great imagery and description created.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Hi Linda, so nice to see a post from you! This is a beautiful picture and poem to go with it. Very nice rhyme and it flows well. Great imagery and description created.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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HI Melissa, my girlfriends daughter wrote it...and the picture is hers...she is so talented...thank you sweet lady for a great review...I am so glad you like it...makes her smile...love Linda xxoo and Audrey...
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You're most welcome friend:)
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smiling big...xxoo love
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
'Soft Paradise' is a great poem.
It rhymes.
The wording is STRONG.
Great artwork: The image is shown is a good fit for this poem.
The author's notes are appreciated.- Thank you!
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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'Soft Paradise' is a great poem.
It rhymes.
The wording is STRONG.
Great artwork: The image is shown is a good fit for this poem.
The author's notes are appreciated.- Thank you!
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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you are so very welcome...xxoo love
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a beautiful poem. well written too. the photography is awesome.
Thank you for sharing this with us. ~Kerry~
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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This is a beautiful poem. well written too. the photography is awesome.
Thank you for sharing this with us. ~Kerry~
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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HI Kerry, thank you for a great review ...I am so glad you like it...my girlfriends daughter wrote the poem...and took the picture...and you are so very welcome...love Audrey....Linda xxoo
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Most welcome to you both Audrey and Linda
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smiling big...xxoo
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Linda, that is a beautiful photo and this is a great thought proving and very poignant poem. She wrote very well! She should be congratulated for the overall poem my friend,,,,,
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Linda, that is a beautiful photo and this is a great thought proving and very poignant poem. She wrote very well! She should be congratulated for the overall poem my friend,,,,,
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Hi Jim, how are you my sweet friend...she is a wonderful young lady....and very talented...I know she will smile when she reads your review...thank you so much for a great review...love Audrey...xxoo Linda
