Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Trump's first 60 days in office passed in tweets about inaugural, getting compensation, declaring war on media, fake news, political deals and election wining influence expressed in a few words.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

Dizzy sounds right to me. He's in so far over his head. He hasn't made a single deal.
I almost feel sorry for him. But not quite.
He made promises. I intend to hold his feet to the fire.
Campaigning was fun. Governing, not so much.
He's a sad character in an Arthur Miller play.

When will the people who voted for him admit they made a mistake?
Soon, I hope.

Peace, Lee


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 Comment Written 28-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017

Interesting comparison -thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

I've reviewed a couple of these contest entries. They've all been pretty good.

I'd vote for this one, though. The alliteration got me, particularly ... Donald's dizzy days! I couldn't have put it better myself!

Well done and best wishes, mystery poet!

Chuckles,

Sonali :)



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 Comment Written 28-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017

Great review zanya