Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "The Cycle"a place to gather my poetic forms
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a beautiful aabb rhymed poem with such strong imagery and rhymes which are not at all forced. A most enjoyable read, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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This is a beautiful aabb rhymed poem with such strong imagery and rhymes which are not at all forced. A most enjoyable read, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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Dear Debbie,
I'm so happy that you enjoyed this poem, and thank you for the lovely review. I appreciate your attention to my work.
Blessed be
Comment from Mastery
Wonderful writing, Jeni. I am learning that you are quite the talented writer with each post. You have such a vivid mind that transfers to the page so brilliantly.
Like: "Luna brightens the sky once more
lighting the stairs to heaven's door.
Nocturnal trekkers' paths she lights,
fairies resume their nightly flight."
Blessings, Bob
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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Wonderful writing, Jeni. I am learning that you are quite the talented writer with each post. You have such a vivid mind that transfers to the page so brilliantly.
Like: "Luna brightens the sky once more
lighting the stairs to heaven's door.
Nocturnal trekkers' paths she lights,
fairies resume their nightly flight."
Blessings, Bob
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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Bob, I truly appreciate your complimentary review. I would like to think that I'm a talented writer, however, you should see the pile of papers containing poetry that I wouldn't dare publish. I hit it out of the park once in awhile. Once again, I thank you for sharing the stanza with me.
I'm sorry that I have not been able to review any of your work to date, but I certainly will as soon as things calm down a bit in my life.
Blessed be
Comment from Marykelly
This is a fanciful way of saying that all is right with the universe. The imagery of nature, animals, and people acting in their appropriate yet purposeful way gives a sense of order to the world. The rhyming quatrains are like mini chapters in a book that tells the story of life.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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This is a fanciful way of saying that all is right with the universe. The imagery of nature, animals, and people acting in their appropriate yet purposeful way gives a sense of order to the world. The rhyming quatrains are like mini chapters in a book that tells the story of life.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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Dear Marykelly,
Yes, I fancy the thought that all is right with the universe. I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery and your comment about the quatrains being like mini-chapters in a book. That warms my heart. Thank you for the lovely review and your attention to my work!
Blessed be
Comment from His Grayness
While I'm not an expert on this form of poetry, I give it high praise for what seemed to me to be perfect rhyme and meter, a series of well connected thoughts and reflections about the nature of our lives. I enjoyed it very much and have no suggestions to improve this fine work! HIS GRAYNESS
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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While I'm not an expert on this form of poetry, I give it high praise for what seemed to me to be perfect rhyme and meter, a series of well connected thoughts and reflections about the nature of our lives. I enjoyed it very much and have no suggestions to improve this fine work! HIS GRAYNESS
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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Thank you for this amazing six-star review! I truly appreciate your generosity and your comments regarding the poem.
Again I thank you for the six-stars.
Blessed be
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Very nicely done. I like how your poem flows. The rhymes are natural and fit very well. The images you share are strong. Very enjoyable.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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Very nicely done. I like how your poem flows. The rhymes are natural and fit very well. The images you share are strong. Very enjoyable.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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Thank you for this kind review and for your attention to my work!
Blessed be
Comment from mvbrooks
what a fun, whimsical poem. The rhyme is consistent and unforced. The description is strong and one can visualize the fairies and children as the poem is read.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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what a fun, whimsical poem. The rhyme is consistent and unforced. The description is strong and one can visualize the fairies and children as the poem is read.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the lovely review and comments about facets of the poem. I appreciate your attention to my work!
Blessed be
Comment from country ranch writer
Life comes full circle for one and all wildlife included,we all benefit from the moon and stars during the night and our sun shinny days come daylight.All is right with the world.
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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Life comes full circle for one and all wildlife included,we all benefit from the moon and stars during the night and our sun shinny days come daylight.All is right with the world.
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much for the lovely comments with the sentiment that all is right with the word. I enjoyed reading your review of my work!
Blessed be
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Comment from lancellot
Ah, very nice. here the day begins and ends with the moon. It inspires magic, imagination and sets the tone for an eventful say for all lifeforms.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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Ah, very nice. here the day begins and ends with the moon. It inspires magic, imagination and sets the tone for an eventful say for all lifeforms.
Well done.
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the lovely review.
As you will see, I'm obsessed with the moon!
I appreciate your continued attention to my work, lancellot!
