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To Last Forever

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Poems by Michael

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Comment from P1
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very well written piece of poetry
so sad to hear of his death at such
a young age and such a talent. pleasure
t o read and reveview your words and thanks
for sharing

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
    Hi Paige...-smile-
    yea it was a shock. Well its my pleasure that you do. love Michael
Comment from CEO2020
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Nice tribute. The spirit of your pen is a deeply religious man. I'm not a good critique of poetry without rhymes, but I can see the purpose and meaning of the poem. I see a child's rise to stardom in your poem.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
    Hi...-smile-
    thanks. I don't know what that means...religious...I mean I know the Webster definition, but not what it means to you. I have known God since I was a child. but I don't understand Him still...my complete trust has been compromised. Yet I also know I really have no choice...He is. appreciate the review. love Michael
Comment from judiverse
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This is a Princely tribute. You do a great job of bringing in aspects of the artist's life. So many times there are obstacles, family disapproval, etc. Prince rose above with his talent. It's a world in which all things are possible if a person has the talent. You also refer to the need he fulfilled--the public's desire for the music. Love your line, "Play princely forever." I haven't been a fan, but I appreciate what he brought to those who loved his music. judi

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
    Hi Judy...-smile-
    sorry i'm late. thank you...I wasn't a groupie or anything. just admired what I saw. appreciate you stopping by. love Michael
reply by judiverse on 29-Apr-2016
    You're very welcome. I don't think you have to be a groupie to enjoy someone's music. judi
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A great tribute to an idol and popular and talented artist Prince. Purple Rain is the song most people will remember about it him.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
    Hi Sandra...-smile-
    yes Maam...if someone told me I'd love a song about purple rain before I heard it ...i'd a looked at em' funny...-smile-...love Michael
Comment from Lannell912
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Yes you had to do it and you did with class. Elegant and sweet your words fit like those old purple no booty leather pants . Well the pop star is gone and yes we will
moan but the show must go on HE WOULD HAVE IT NO OTHER WAY R.I P PRINCE

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
    Ha...-smile-
    well thank you...haha...ah I never had the balls to wear them...haha...but man can you imagine how awesome I'd look...ahhaha...o no bootie....yea...probably not.
    yea I'm doing what I can to keep the dream alive...thanks for coming to my concert. love Michael
Comment from closetpoetjester
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A fitting tribute Michael and this man changed the face of music and made his presence felt for a long time.
His legacy is in his fans and the millions of artists he has gone on to inspire.
Well done mate
Sassy xx

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
    Hey Sassafras...-smile-
    yea he had his own that's for sure. thank you Foxy for stopping by, it always excites me. love ya Michael
reply by closetpoetjester on 22-Apr-2016
    I think you just may be a little too easily excited
    haha
    Sassafrassy x
Comment from VaV-VOOM
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WOW! I really enjoyed that. The flow was nice and smooth. Thank you for the sharing of your poetry, and may Prince RIP! Write On! VaV-VOOM!

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
    ha well thank you vav voom...appreciate your good taste and reviewing ability. big love michael
reply by VaV-VOOM on 22-Apr-2016
    Your welcome, great poem. VaV-VOOM!
Comment from dmt1967
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He was up there with the king and Micheal Jackson in my eyes. I like this tribute to him. And another one bites the dust. All my childhood celebrities are either dying, coming out of the closet or are being outed as pedophiles lol. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
    Hi...-smile-
    ah yea I wasn't real comfortable with Michael's explanation.
    but if they had the goods on him...we'd know. Big love michael
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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Well done! A great tribute to Prince; his music and his 'Take' on life. I think the use of the language was a good idea. Thanks for reminding me of how I love "Purple Rain". The flow and descriptive stanzas were excellent. Thanks for sharing.

Peace, Jesse

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
    Hey man...-smile-
    I thank you Sir. Well alright, it was my pleasure. love Michael
Comment from Senyai
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Ah, his best song for sure. Purple Rain. Sad Prince is gone, another one bites the dust. They all leave early.


Your excellent poem was such a timely tribute. Thank you.

All the best, Reconciled.
Senyai

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
    thank you...love Michael