Astatula (Final Edition)
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Murder At The Chinese Laundry"A young boy tries to turn his life around.Can he?
22 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh my this is where you are taking it.
I never caught on and was a little confused till I reached the middle of this piece. Did I miss a prologue?
Very nicely written. Guess I'm now hooked
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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Oh my this is where you are taking it.
I never caught on and was a little confused till I reached the middle of this piece. Did I miss a prologue?
Very nicely written. Guess I'm now hooked
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this part of the story.
Comment from Ricky1024
Yes, The Lord Above has given to me...
"Another gift to review...
"From you Brett!"
And based on theme, Imager, and Content...
Your reward awaits!"
Thanks,
Ricky...
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Yes, The Lord Above has given to me...
"Another gift to review...
"From you Brett!"
And based on theme, Imager, and Content...
Your reward awaits!"
Thanks,
Ricky...
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Ricky you are too much! I appreciate it a lot. Glad you enjoyed this portion of this story. There is plenty more to come.
