Comment from Joyce Long

Excellent

Best wishes for the Political Flash fiction contest. Your story including God is very different. I really believe you could include any of the four in your story. Thank you for sharing your ideas. It should continue to be interesting.
Joyce 04-04-16

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016

Thanks for your excellent review, Joyce, and for the good wishes!

I agree, the race still is interesting, and getting more so day by day.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Leaders who think that they talk to God are inherently of the most dangerous kind, or so i always thought. Yet here we have one who not only talks to God but tries to negotiate with Him too. Scary!
I like the way you use the blasphemous, "Jesus! yes"!

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016

Thanks for your generous review, Tony! You're right, Trump would be dangerous if elected, but as far as I know, he doesn't talk to God. That was only my fiction talking. (But I think he would try to cut a deal with Him if he could.)

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

You mentioned free verse poetry in your authors notes, so I had to double check to see that this was indeed a flash fiction. Either way well written.

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016

Thanks for the excellent review and heads-up, Donandvicki! I corrected the faux pas promptly!