Cigarettes
Quitting after almost 30 years34 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
that is so wonderful...beyond me why people want to kill themselves over some smoke...I wish my sister would stop...most do the last two weeks of their lives...so sad...and just blowing money away...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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that is so wonderful...beyond me why people want to kill themselves over some smoke...I wish my sister would stop...most do the last two weeks of their lives...so sad...and just blowing money away...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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Thank you
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you are so welcome...xxoo luff
Comment from rjuselius
I quit smoking a year ago and haven't regretted it since. Your poem is right on the money. It makes an important social commentary.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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I quit smoking a year ago and haven't regretted it since. Your poem is right on the money. It makes an important social commentary.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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Thank you for your review
Comment from Ben Colder
Perfect. Yes, you do, poet. I smoke them for twenty years and quit now save money. never miss them not one day. Breath better and live longer.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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Perfect. Yes, you do, poet. I smoke them for twenty years and quit now save money. never miss them not one day. Breath better and live longer.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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Thank you Ben
Comment from scd41
Kudos to you for quitting smoking after thirty years! For many who are addicted to smoking, it is an impossible task. I, too, quit smoking after twenty years and I did not have to struggle, fail and struggle. It was just a decision made with firmness and backed by a strong will power. Your short poem is sweet and hence I found it enjoyable.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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Kudos to you for quitting smoking after thirty years! For many who are addicted to smoking, it is an impossible task. I, too, quit smoking after twenty years and I did not have to struggle, fail and struggle. It was just a decision made with firmness and backed by a strong will power. Your short poem is sweet and hence I found it enjoyable.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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Thank you for your review and words of encouragement.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Some people do find it difficult hto quit smoking because of the habitual routine. If the routine can be changed it will be a little bit easier to quit.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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Some people do find it difficult hto quit smoking because of the habitual routine. If the routine can be changed it will be a little bit easier to quit.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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Thank you for your review Sandra
Comment from William Ross
congratulations on kicking the habit. i do so try so hard i just can't seem to beat it. Nice job on this thanks for sharing this and have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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congratulations on kicking the habit. i do so try so hard i just can't seem to beat it. Nice job on this thanks for sharing this and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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Thank you for your review William
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
This is very good. Every line makes sense. A short poem that tells a good story is not easy. You have managed to do it so well. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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This is very good. Every line makes sense. A short poem that tells a good story is not easy. You have managed to do it so well. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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Thank you Dorothy.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Quitting smoking can be very hard for most people.
Like all bad habits.
This poem gives good advice...just stop smoking.
Should be a good contest entry.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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Quitting smoking can be very hard for most people.
Like all bad habits.
This poem gives good advice...just stop smoking.
Should be a good contest entry.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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Thank you for your review Brett.
Comment from lindafisher
I did this after 30 years 15 years ago, My son has recently given up also after 30 years. Maybe there is a pattern here. Good subject matter. Hope it makes smokers think. Regards Linda
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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I did this after 30 years 15 years ago, My son has recently given up also after 30 years. Maybe there is a pattern here. Good subject matter. Hope it makes smokers think. Regards Linda
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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Thank you Linda.
Comment from Sambangi
True, I read somewhere quitting each cigarette equals to saving 17 seconds of life. But I have seen many people starting again after quitting for one or two months. We need to have lots of determination. No smoking patches will have limited impact. Good message delivered through this little poem. All the best
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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True, I read somewhere quitting each cigarette equals to saving 17 seconds of life. But I have seen many people starting again after quitting for one or two months. We need to have lots of determination. No smoking patches will have limited impact. Good message delivered through this little poem. All the best
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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Thank you for your review. I'm crossing my fingers we can stick with it.
