Texas Dream Catcher
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Comment from pbroussard209
awesome and exciting chapter, I know I have missed one or two, sorry about that, I went back to work and my son joined the scouts so every weekend I have off I have been at Lowes watching him sell popcorn. My sweet boy. I will try and get to the chapters I missed later in the week.
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awesome and exciting chapter, I know I have missed one or two, sorry about that, I went back to work and my son joined the scouts so every weekend I have off I have been at Lowes watching him sell popcorn. My sweet boy. I will try and get to the chapters I missed later in the week.
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. I have bought some scout popcorn
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
Another tense chapter. Could we be about to hear who Jim really works for now? Sounds like there's something in this semi- the Los Zetas really want ...
I think a six for the suspense.
Patrick
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Hi Barbara,
Another tense chapter. Could we be about to hear who Jim really works for now? Sounds like there's something in this semi- the Los Zetas really want ...
I think a six for the suspense.
Patrick
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Comment from nancyrabbrose
You are a good writer and have a very interesting chapter for your book. Yes, this is my first time to read your good-in-progress. I live in Texas myself and was able to imagine the scene. Good luck with the continuation of your story. Writing a novel is a brave task; I have one in progress myself. And, congratulations on your published book. I hope by ow your cat has been found. I have two cats and I can really feel for you. Take care of yourself.
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You are a good writer and have a very interesting chapter for your book. Yes, this is my first time to read your good-in-progress. I live in Texas myself and was able to imagine the scene. Good luck with the continuation of your story. Writing a novel is a brave task; I have one in progress myself. And, congratulations on your published book. I hope by ow your cat has been found. I have two cats and I can really feel for you. Take care of yourself.
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Comment from angelface2
Another very well written chapter, Barbara. I know nothing about machine guns, but you gave such good descriptions of the action, it is still thrilling. Can't wait to see how Jim turns out. (I hope you find your kitty, as I am a cat lover.) :>) Miss Sally
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Another very well written chapter, Barbara. I know nothing about machine guns, but you gave such good descriptions of the action, it is still thrilling. Can't wait to see how Jim turns out. (I hope you find your kitty, as I am a cat lover.) :>) Miss Sally
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Comment from Gert sherwood
First thing Bar
I'm out of sixes.
This chapter deserves one
How do you know so much about the actions of armed helicopters.
You, certainly had leads of exciting scenes..
Hope your tabby returned or found.
Gert
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First thing Bar
I'm out of sixes.
This chapter deserves one
How do you know so much about the actions of armed helicopters.
You, certainly had leads of exciting scenes..
Hope your tabby returned or found.
Gert
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. My husband did 23 years i n the military.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Lot's of activity here - a dangerous place to be. Those who have escaped the bullets and run in a different direction will be picked up by those from the helicopters.
But still, they are firing at Soni, Tatiana ..... and poor Jim, who takes a bullet.
An enjoyable read, Barbara
Margaret
He's too close(.)
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Lot's of activity here - a dangerous place to be. Those who have escaped the bullets and run in a different direction will be picked up by those from the helicopters.
But still, they are firing at Soni, Tatiana ..... and poor Jim, who takes a bullet.
An enjoyable read, Barbara
Margaret
He's too close(.)
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Comment from Mai Mai
This is an interesting piece. It flows nicely and is easy to read. I found no spags in the piece. It is well written. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
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This is an interesting piece. It flows nicely and is easy to read. I found no spags in the piece. It is well written. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
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Comment from OLA THOMAS
Kudos to you on this chapter like the previous ones. The storyline is not watered down, still thrilling. You are doing a great job, but sometimes I miss some of your posts.
ola thomas
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Kudos to you on this chapter like the previous ones. The storyline is not watered down, still thrilling. You are doing a great job, but sometimes I miss some of your posts.
ola thomas
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Comment from PoemsOfDD
A solid write. It held my attention from start to finish. I could sense the mayhem from the noise of the helicopters to all the shots being fired. The scenes were described well. It was an enjoyable read. I look forward to the next installment.
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A solid write. It held my attention from start to finish. I could sense the mayhem from the noise of the helicopters to all the shots being fired. The scenes were described well. It was an enjoyable read. I look forward to the next installment.
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
Intriguing part of a much longer chapter, as you put it. Would prefer to see the whole chapter posted together so its parts can be seen in context. However, this section holds interest throughout.
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Intriguing part of a much longer chapter, as you put it. Would prefer to see the whole chapter posted together so its parts can be seen in context. However, this section holds interest throughout.
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