Texas Dream Catcher
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Chapter Diecsiete, Part Cuatro"Drug & human trafficking, can romance win?
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Comment from CelticSkye
Even though I am completely confused as I have not read the previous chapters, this most definitely appears to be a book I would read, and most likely more than once. Its very well written and I'm glad the author does not redefine each character in every chapter. I have read books that do that and it drives me nuts.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015
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Even though I am completely confused as I have not read the previous chapters, this most definitely appears to be a book I would read, and most likely more than once. Its very well written and I'm glad the author does not redefine each character in every chapter. I have read books that do that and it drives me nuts.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
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Thank you for leaving this kind review.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
I'm beginning to want to see Littleton beaten to a pulp - preferably at some point when he's been stripped of all authority. He's a nasty little dictator and needs to be 'Saddamed'. It's morons like him that lead kids into the sort of stupidity we've seen in Charleston over the weekend.
Patrick
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015
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Hi Barbara,
I'm beginning to want to see Littleton beaten to a pulp - preferably at some point when he's been stripped of all authority. He's a nasty little dictator and needs to be 'Saddamed'. It's morons like him that lead kids into the sort of stupidity we've seen in Charleston over the weekend.
Patrick
Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015
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Thank you for leaving this kind review. There's a posse gathering to get Littleton, want to join? LOL
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Sign me up!
Patrick
Comment from Chris Tee
Barbara, this is another excellent chapter part, which kept me totally captivated and it was a pleasure to read this piece. Well done indeed my friend.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015
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Barbara, this is another excellent chapter part, which kept me totally captivated and it was a pleasure to read this piece. Well done indeed my friend.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
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Comment from Curly Girly
This was another interesting an informative chapter. Kuruk nursed his granddaughter back by helping to keep her well hydrated with the juice from the fruit of prickly pears. She still seems to be thinking normally, which is a good sign.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015
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This was another interesting an informative chapter. Kuruk nursed his granddaughter back by helping to keep her well hydrated with the juice from the fruit of prickly pears. She still seems to be thinking normally, which is a good sign.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
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Comment from Pantygynt
This is one of my few forays into the world of prose. I'm more usually found in poetry land but here we go.
This piece tells its story mainly through the medium of direct speech and the only chunk of narrative comes towards the end. The main problem for the reader is to keep track of who is speakin and the main problem for the writer is how to make this clear without too many repeats of "he said" or a whole range of words meaning that.
It seems to me that you have overcome the problem pretty well because it was no problem for me to follow the track.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015
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This is one of my few forays into the world of prose. I'm more usually found in poetry land but here we go.
This piece tells its story mainly through the medium of direct speech and the only chunk of narrative comes towards the end. The main problem for the reader is to keep track of who is speakin and the main problem for the writer is how to make this clear without too many repeats of "he said" or a whole range of words meaning that.
It seems to me that you have overcome the problem pretty well because it was no problem for me to follow the track.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
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Comment from Sankey
This was another great read. Still an excellent story, Barbara. No spags this time around. Keep up the great writing. We are still in there wth you.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015
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This was another great read. Still an excellent story, Barbara. No spags this time around. Keep up the great writing. We are still in there wth you.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
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Comment from Phyllis Stewart
It's clearly a setup by Miguel. How stupid are those govt idiots anyway? LOL! Typical govt guys, tho. I love the info on the pp cactus... makes me want to try some. :)
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015
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It's clearly a setup by Miguel. How stupid are those govt idiots anyway? LOL! Typical govt guys, tho. I love the info on the pp cactus... makes me want to try some. :)
Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015
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Thank you for leaving this kind review. Gov't idiots are stupid, for sure.
Comment from elgone
The question now is why Miguel wants to frame Kuruk. There is something going on and Miguel wants a piece of the action or total control over it. Perhaps in involves the reservation and/or the ranch.
There is a typo in the heading: Miguel looks more lik(e) a suspect
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015
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The question now is why Miguel wants to frame Kuruk. There is something going on and Miguel wants a piece of the action or total control over it. Perhaps in involves the reservation and/or the ranch.
There is a typo in the heading: Miguel looks more lik(e) a suspect
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Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
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Thank you for leaving this kind review. Will make the correction.
Comment from royowen
I often wonder why people will blame the descendants of a peoples whowere reputed to have done awful things in.a bygone day. Prejudice is rife, illogical, irrational and anything else you attach to it! Soni has woken up and they all figure that Miguel is the one who did the deed! Well done, well written, and have a great vacation, blessings, Roy.
Typo: Cuartro - Quatro?
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I often wonder why people will blame the descendants of a peoples whowere reputed to have done awful things in.a bygone day. Prejudice is rife, illogical, irrational and anything else you attach to it! Soni has woken up and they all figure that Miguel is the one who did the deed! Well done, well written, and have a great vacation, blessings, Roy.
Typo: Cuartro - Quatro?
Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
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Comment from oNray
this story is interesting and well presented. this is my first read on this but I was given a lot of information in this short read. well done
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015
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this story is interesting and well presented. this is my first read on this but I was given a lot of information in this short read. well done
Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
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