Texas Dream Catcher
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Chapter Trece; Part Tres"Drug & human trafficking, can romance win?
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Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Soni's unique abilities make the story even more interesting, especially when she senses danger. Those two dogs are unique as well, and very entertaining. I love your characters and the intermingling dramas and dialogue, Giddy
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Soni's unique abilities make the story even more interesting, especially when she senses danger. Those two dogs are unique as well, and very entertaining. I love your characters and the intermingling dramas and dialogue, Giddy
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. HUGS!!
Comment from Writingfundimension
I agree with Grandfather about there not being any coincidences, Barbara. The chapter flowed beautifully and further involves the reader in the relationship of Soni and Jim. Like Soni, I'm just not sure about that guy!
:) Bev
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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I agree with Grandfather about there not being any coincidences, Barbara. The chapter flowed beautifully and further involves the reader in the relationship of Soni and Jim. Like Soni, I'm just not sure about that guy!
:) Bev
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. HUGS
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You're very welcome, Barbara.
Comment from boxergirl
Ha! The "nannies" got tired of hearing Jim and Soni bickering. Soni is questioning all the bad things that have happened to her since she rescued Jim. And now she is having premonition of something bad happening. Good to leave us on the edge of our seats, even though I don' t like it. lol
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Ha! The "nannies" got tired of hearing Jim and Soni bickering. Soni is questioning all the bad things that have happened to her since she rescued Jim. And now she is having premonition of something bad happening. Good to leave us on the edge of our seats, even though I don' t like it. lol
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. The dogs seem to upstage the people in my novels. OH NO!!!
Comment from abbasjoy
Soni and Jim argue like a married couple, while the two dogs really are smarter than the two humans. They at least try to get along together, both refusing to move until the arguing stops.
Soni is incredibly intelligent in the ways of the outdoors, and her senses are heightened so she picks up on every nuance of change. The dogs and her are almost like one, with their acute ability to hear even the slightest sound.
Danger is lurking and Soni as well as the dogs know it, but Jim doesn't recognise it.
You always leave us with a "cliff hanger."
Another exciting chapter.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Soni and Jim argue like a married couple, while the two dogs really are smarter than the two humans. They at least try to get along together, both refusing to move until the arguing stops.
Soni is incredibly intelligent in the ways of the outdoors, and her senses are heightened so she picks up on every nuance of change. The dogs and her are almost like one, with their acute ability to hear even the slightest sound.
Danger is lurking and Soni as well as the dogs know it, but Jim doesn't recognise it.
You always leave us with a "cliff hanger."
Another exciting chapter.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Barb,
These two are a work in progress. About the time they make nice, one or the other gets all squiggly and discomfits the other --- therefore upsetting the dogs. Jeesh!
Good chapter, with a good hook at the end.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Hi, Barb,
These two are a work in progress. About the time they make nice, one or the other gets all squiggly and discomfits the other --- therefore upsetting the dogs. Jeesh!
Good chapter, with a good hook at the end.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Loved the expression "the two nannies" hehe about the dogs. Another great read. Was this is a bit shorter than normal? Well done as usual and no errors. Tootsie55 is also reviewing your story. Will message you later.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Loved the expression "the two nannies" hehe about the dogs. Another great read. Was this is a bit shorter than normal? Well done as usual and no errors. Tootsie55 is also reviewing your story. Will message you later.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
Excellent chapter with your usual suspenseful ending. I have one question, though: Where Are Isabella and Emanuel? Have I forgotten from the last chapter? Were they left somewhere to be picked up later? If not, shouldn't some passing mention of them be made in this chapter?
When the dogs moved, Soni preceded forward. [... Soni PROCEEDED forward.]
Jim followed. "Care to fill me in?" [This line and the next needs to be spaced.]
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Excellent chapter with your usual suspenseful ending. I have one question, though: Where Are Isabella and Emanuel? Have I forgotten from the last chapter? Were they left somewhere to be picked up later? If not, shouldn't some passing mention of them be made in this chapter?
When the dogs moved, Soni preceded forward. [... Soni PROCEEDED forward.]
Jim followed. "Care to fill me in?" [This line and the next needs to be spaced.]
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Soni has esp I guess, or she's picking up vibrations from the ground... someone is coming? This is good tension, but I wish I didn't have to wait to find out what it is. LOL! :)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Soni has esp I guess, or she's picking up vibrations from the ground... someone is coming? This is good tension, but I wish I didn't have to wait to find out what it is. LOL! :)
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Soni is in touch with her instincts, and if Jim has sense, he will listen to her - there is danger approaching! I'm on pins and needles now, waiting for the next posting.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Soni is in touch with her instincts, and if Jim has sense, he will listen to her - there is danger approaching! I'm on pins and needles now, waiting for the next posting.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
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My pleasure. :)
Comment from angelface2
I love the picture, Barbara. It is so beautiful. You tell a good story and always leave us guessing. I like that. Dogs are smart. They can sense something. As did Soni. Hope it isn't anything too serious. :>D Miss Sally
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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I love the picture, Barbara. It is so beautiful. You tell a good story and always leave us guessing. I like that. Dogs are smart. They can sense something. As did Soni. Hope it isn't anything too serious. :>D Miss Sally
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Thank you for kind support of writing.
