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A riddle.66 total reviews
Comment from Bobbi22
Your short poem uses few words to express the agony and fear for those victims of the beheadings. Artwork complements your poem as well. Very well written.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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Your short poem uses few words to express the agony and fear for those victims of the beheadings. Artwork complements your poem as well. Very well written.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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Thank you, RightPics, for your kind review. I used the fewest words possible to express the agony and fear of the victims.
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Thank you, RightPics, for your kind review. I used the fewest words possible to express the agony and fear of the victims.
Comment from dmt1967
The picture scared me a little as I am scared of spiders, but I liked the poem and the orange background. The spider on the orange picture did fit the poem rather well. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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The picture scared me a little as I am scared of spiders, but I liked the poem and the orange background. The spider on the orange picture did fit the poem rather well. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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Thank you for your kind review. Yes, the spider on the orange moon is scary to fit the mood of my poem.
Comment from RGstar
The name Isis put a damper on my mood, yet not so your write. I thought this cleverly write, yet I would stick to tangerines in your author's note...the beheading brought a sadness when I originally had a smile.Best wishes,
RGstar
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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The name Isis put a damper on my mood, yet not so your write. I thought this cleverly write, yet I would stick to tangerines in your author's note...the beheading brought a sadness when I originally had a smile.Best wishes,
RGstar
Comment Written 23-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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Thank you, RGstar, for your kind review. Yes, this is sad.
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Thank you, RGstar, for your kind review. Yes, this is sad.
Comment from amahra
Really creepy subject matter, but I guess somebody has to tell it. Really nice art work of the tangerine and spider. Great job.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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Really creepy subject matter, but I guess somebody has to tell it. Really nice art work of the tangerine and spider. Great job.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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Thank you, amahra, for your kind review. The subject matter is really creepy.
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Thank you, amahra, for your kind review. The subject matter is really creepy.
Comment from alexisleech
I cannot say I enjoyed your poem for obvious reasons but that takes nothing away from it's quality, which was excellent. In three short lines you tell a story that should never have happened but must never be forgotten. Well done.
Alexis x
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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I cannot say I enjoyed your poem for obvious reasons but that takes nothing away from it's quality, which was excellent. In three short lines you tell a story that should never have happened but must never be forgotten. Well done.
Alexis x
Comment Written 23-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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Yes, alexisleech, I wish there had not been a reason for me to write this poem. Thank you for the review of a story told in three short lines.
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Yes, alexisleech, I wish there had not been a reason for me to write this poem. Thank you for the review of a story told in three short lines.
Comment from Ben Colder
The folly of man tries to kill the spirit which only God can do. No person sees the spirit enter and no person sees it live, but it is there. Only a change of chemistry.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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The folly of man tries to kill the spirit which only God can do. No person sees the spirit enter and no person sees it live, but it is there. Only a change of chemistry.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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Thank you, Ben Colder, for your review and spiritual insight.
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Thank you, Ben Colder, for your review and spiritual insight.
Comment from Eric1
Hi Sis Cat, Your Haiku explains to the reader that orange is now the new terror colour, It is now common knowledge that if you are wearing orange in the ISIS state you will die! These poems are needed to keep these animals at the forefront of peoples minds, and I applaud you sir.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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Hi Sis Cat, Your Haiku explains to the reader that orange is now the new terror colour, It is now common knowledge that if you are wearing orange in the ISIS state you will die! These poems are needed to keep these animals at the forefront of peoples minds, and I applaud you sir.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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Thank you, Eric, for your review. Orange is the new color of terror. One of the things our poems achieve is that they keep these atrocities at the forefront of people's minds. Thank you for your review. I love your "Je Suis Charlie" poem.
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Thank you, Eric, for your review. Orange is the new color of terror. One of the things our poems achieve is that they keep these atrocities at the forefront of people's minds. Thank you for your review. I love your "Je Suis Charlie" poem.
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It was my pleasure Sis, thank you for taking the time my friend.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a powerful, and terrifying poem all at once. These beheadings have now changed to being put in a cage and burnt alive. Those responsible are not human. Excellently put, in those very few lines. Sandra xsx
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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This is a powerful, and terrifying poem all at once. These beheadings have now changed to being put in a cage and burnt alive. Those responsible are not human. Excellently put, in those very few lines. Sandra xsx
Comment Written 23-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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Thank you, Sandra, for your review. I am not going to write another poem about the cage burnings. I have said all I wanted to say on the subject for now with very few lines. Thanks.
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Thank you, Sandra, for your review. I am not going to write another poem about the cage burnings. I have said all I wanted to say on the subject for now with very few lines. Thanks.
Comment from gypsycaravan
This is a most powerful and timely poem. The symbolism of the orange robe compared to the tangerine made the senselessness of their acts seem more real. Thanks for writing it and posting.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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This is a most powerful and timely poem. The symbolism of the orange robe compared to the tangerine made the senselessness of their acts seem more real. Thanks for writing it and posting.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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Thank you, gypsycaravan. I turned one reviewer off of eating tangerines for life because I compared the fruit to the color of the robes and jumpsuits the executed wear. I am humbled that you appreciate my posting of this poem.
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Thank you, gypsycaravan. I turned one reviewer off of eating tangerines for life because I compared the fruit to the color of the robes and jumpsuits the executed wear. I am humbled that you appreciate my posting of this poem.
Comment from Jacob Collins
A chilling piece of writing, Sis Cat which was well written. I loved the imagery used here, especially in the two last lines. An excellent piece...Jacob
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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A chilling piece of writing, Sis Cat which was well written. I loved the imagery used here, especially in the two last lines. An excellent piece...Jacob
Comment Written 23-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015
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Thank you, Jacob, for your kind review. I reduced images to their basic elements to convey the story. Thanks.
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Thank you, Jacob, for your kind review. I reduced images to their basic elements to convey the story. Thanks.
