haiku (crossing from here)
haiku 4-7-521 total reviews
Comment from Kingsland
That picture really adds to the thoughts in this poem. There is white water and then there is violent water that is white. I would perchance to say that the last thought here fits this presentation. I enjoyed reading this artful presentation... John
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That picture really adds to the thoughts in this poem. There is white water and then there is violent water that is white. I would perchance to say that the last thought here fits this presentation. I enjoyed reading this artful presentation... John
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2015
