Comment from Caressa_08

Excellent

This is a delightful haiku, I really like it, & do like the haiku for expression of nature as this one, with such an appropriate picture & to also, understand, too, that these polar bears so match their white atmosphere..Best Wishes in this competition.

Caressa

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you Caressa for another all inspiring review with excellent stars. I always look forward to receiving your reviews.
God Bless!
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Comment from Sarah Butterfly

Excellent

Original and creative way of portraying a snowstorm. The picture joined fits your wording well. Nicely done!

Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you Sarah for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to your great feedback. God Bless!
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Comment from skye

Excellent

storm of snow
ravages the skies with blinding fury
polar bears dance

Great visual inside your poem.
The long/short fits the form, and you use harsh words to describe the storm... ravages, blinding.
Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you Skye for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to the awesome feedback you leave.
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Comment from thee-name

Excellent

Good Haiku poem. Describes picture good.
STORM OF SNOW
RAVAGES THE SKIES WITH BLINDING FURY
POLAR BEARS DANCE

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you thee-name for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to the awesome feedback you leave.
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reply by thee-name on 16-Oct-2014

THANK YOU!

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

"storm of snow
ravages the skies with blinding fury
polar bears dance"
this is a fab piece of poetic art! the imagery is most welcome for the atmosphere it entails:)
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you rjuselius for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to the awesome feedback you leave.
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Comment from mikemagine

Excellent

This puts me right there! I'm IN the snow storm(freezing my ass off, lol)watching these magnificent creatures perform a somewhat bizarre but entertaining dance. Your words are perfectly chosen!!

Thanks for sharing!

Mike

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you Mike for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to the awesome feedback you leave.
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reply by mikemagine on 16-Oct-2014

Sure thing! I'm going to vote now.

Mike

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Awesome, the ballot is full this time LOL.

reply by mikemagine on 16-Oct-2014

I voted, but I'm apparently the only one. I'm puzzled because there was a six-rev. left on the line next to your poem. Maybe that person forgot to click...Then too, only one other has two votes...

Best wishes in the contest!

Mike

reply by mikemagine on 16-Oct-2014

Yep. And the number of votes per entrant are close so far:)

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

LOL, so many without a vote yet! I love to write and wish this is what I did for a living. How happy I would be. God Bless!

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thanks again Mike! I'm not sure who all actually votes, in the past have seen the best come in last.

reply by mikemagine on 16-Oct-2014

I'm not surprised that sometimes the best come in last...:) Who knows exactly how people decide...!

Glad to vote for your haiku!

Mike

reply by mikemagine on 16-Oct-2014

Yep, it is kinda funny:) I too wouldn't mind making a living as a writer:)

Mike

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

I am currently writing a Horror/Thriller novel which is my favorite genre and the feedback I have received in fantstory has catapulted me to greater levels.

Comment from livelylinda

Excellent

Author: aren't they fantastic creatures? They are so huge and can be so savage but they play together and the sight of a mother polar bear with her cubs is so filled with love. Great poem and a good contender in the contest. livelylinda

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you livelylinda for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to the awesome feedback you leave.
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Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

I love the sense of this one. There are times when tempests are unleashed upon us with such blinding fury that all we can do to save ourselves is get up and dance.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you tfawcus for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to the awesome feedback you leave.
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Comment from Trybuck

Excellent

I'm glad the polar bears enjoy the challenge of romping and playing in the snow. Every season needs to be appreciated by someone or something. Me, I'll take spring and fall.
Well done with your entry, Buck

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you Buck for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to the awesome feedback you leave.
God Bless!
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Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

I have never read a haiku with 4-10-4 syllable count. It give more scope to the meaning of the poem, and all your chosen words make a very good read. I like it.

Good luck in the contest.
Mary

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you Mary for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to the awesome feedback you leave.
God Bless!
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