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William, where are you?

3yr old boy goes missing.

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Comment from adewpearl
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How tragic that we have to worry about such things - snatched from his own yard - we are so vigilant, and still, children go missing. I like the poignant tone of your poem, one of loving concern and compassion.
I can't find you,little man - add the comma for direct address
Brooke

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 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    Two weeks have passed, the police have nothing to go on. We think he was snatched. The chances of his return are slim, at best. I pray he is safe with god, not a play thing of a paedophile. Children are precious, as you well know. Thanks Brooke.
reply by adewpearl on 28-Sep-2014
    In Philly they convicted a pedophile kidnapper just last week - the woman snatched the little one from school. I forget how long she had her, but I'm sure it was at least a couple of weeks before the child was found roaming alone on the street. The testimony about what she did to the precious child had even cops crying.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    William's case is strange. No sign of footprints or him being in the forest nearby. His grandmother is devastated. Strange that the family hasn't come forward with a plea on TV? Something not right about this - I think it was planned. :-{
reply by adewpearl on 28-Sep-2014
    how very sad - I will never understand twisted people who would lay a hand on a child
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    God has the last say to these sick bastards!
Comment from royowen
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Amen to that Kay, this happened in Queensland? Didn't Hear about it here, maybe we did, not sure! Such a sad work, these things are always terrible particularly if they're not found! It reminds children that went missing here many years ago! Nice abab rhyming, nice even meter, I loved this well written work, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    You thinking of the Beaumont children a long time ago? Yes, William was snatched here in QLD about two weeks ago. Please God it isn't going to be another Daniel Morecombe case. The police are helpless because there was no sign of him. Thanks for reading and prayer would be appreciated. Blessings, Kay.
reply by royowen on 28-Sep-2014
    They're the ones also some others they haven't ever been found either! I pray this little boy be found and the family comforted! Roy.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
    I just realised that he lived in Kendall in NSW not QLD. When you look at your grandchild Roy, please think of young William. Kay XX
reply by royowen on 29-Sep-2014
    I will, these are always the most upsetting, you just want little ones out of sight! Roy.
Comment from mumsyone
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Hi Kay, I'm sure there is a place reserved for those who abduct children, and it won't be a nice one. I hope and pray that they find little William safe somewhere.
Good poem; I pray that it reaches far in helping to find this little boy.

Pray that god (God) holds you fast.

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 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    Hello Mum, Thanks for reading; can't get this child out of my mind. Australia is waiting for some sign of his being. Usually, they are not found or searching can go on for years. Bless you, Kay.