She brings the beauty....
The steadfast love...133 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
royowen - this is simply lovely -
I feel the pride and joy in your
words - such a blessing and what
a smile!!
Margaret
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
royowen - this is simply lovely -
I feel the pride and joy in your
words - such a blessing and what
a smile!!
Margaret
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you Margaret, they truly bring the sunshine! She brightens our day! Thank you for this outstanding review, comments and stars, blessings, Roy.
Comment from marijmd
Ah I know the feeling! The happy nature of my kids makes each moment more precious and more special to live through - It is like I can see the wonder in the little things again through them.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
Ah I know the feeling! The happy nature of my kids makes each moment more precious and more special to live through - It is like I can see the wonder in the little things again through them.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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That is the wonderful gift they brings, thank you for these empathetic review and comments, blessings Roy.
Comment from GWHARGIS
what a pretty littl girl. I know you're very proud and your love for here came through each line. God was indeed very good to give you sucha gift. Lovely poem and very heartfelt. Gretchen
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
what a pretty littl girl. I know you're very proud and your love for here came through each line. God was indeed very good to give you sucha gift. Lovely poem and very heartfelt. Gretchen
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you Gretchen, for the lovely review and great words, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Kingsland
Children always put me in a good mood. People forget the joy of childhood and grow to be cynical in their lives. This was an excellent piece of poetic art that I enjoyed reading and writing this response for... John
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
Children always put me in a good mood. People forget the joy of childhood and grow to be cynical in their lives. This was an excellent piece of poetic art that I enjoyed reading and writing this response for... John
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you John for your gracious words and great review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from dragonpoet
The young always inspire hope and reopen the ability to experiment and experience life anew.
She is beautiful and in her eyes you see love of life. With such happiness abounding, she can't help but spread it.
The poem shows your love for her and your thankfulness to God for her.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
The young always inspire hope and reopen the ability to experiment and experience life anew.
She is beautiful and in her eyes you see love of life. With such happiness abounding, she can't help but spread it.
The poem shows your love for her and your thankfulness to God for her.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you for these words of grace and encouraging review, blessings, Roy.
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You're welcome, Roy.
Joan
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You're welcome, Roy.
Joan
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. What a great rtibute of love from a mom. I do not know the bible, so the notes helped with the background. However, the poem was lovely all on it's own.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
Hi. What a great rtibute of love from a mom. I do not know the bible, so the notes helped with the background. However, the poem was lovely all on it's own.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for these gracious words and lovely review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
A sweet poem of thanksgiving for a beautiful granddaughter presented in beautifully crafted abcb quatrains. Well done. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
A sweet poem of thanksgiving for a beautiful granddaughter presented in beautifully crafted abcb quatrains. Well done. :) Nancy
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you Nancy for your wonderful review, and gracious comments, blessings, Roy,
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Royowen,
In the light of Author Notes,
Lovely piece of poetry beautifully depicting its theme!
Wording is simple as well as impressive.
Smooth flow with nice rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
The most striking lines are:
"....Like the sparkle in the dew drop,
Like joy within reveals His way!"
Excellent!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
Hello Royowen,
In the light of Author Notes,
Lovely piece of poetry beautifully depicting its theme!
Wording is simple as well as impressive.
Smooth flow with nice rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
The most striking lines are:
"....Like the sparkle in the dew drop,
Like joy within reveals His way!"
Excellent!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you RP for these words of grace, and great review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Aussie
Beautiful child; captured the sunlight that she brings in your gratitude to the Father. Children are precious and Jesus said "don't send the children away," when he was teaching. Well done my friend - many blessings have you.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
Beautiful child; captured the sunlight that she brings in your gratitude to the Father. Children are precious and Jesus said "don't send the children away," when he was teaching. Well done my friend - many blessings have you.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you for being so gracious and giving such a lovely review, and stars Kay, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Waishali Deshmukh
A delightful short poem just like the cute baby in the picture. The feeling of having the little ones around is so refreshing...and you have caught this feeling wonderfully well.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
A delightful short poem just like the cute baby in the picture. The feeling of having the little ones around is so refreshing...and you have caught this feeling wonderfully well.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and comments, blessings, Roy.