Comment from gazzagodbod

Excellent

wonderful dramatic picture and wow such drama in the piece my money is on humanity it will conquer all thanks my friend xxgazzagodbodxx

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014

thanks gazza

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

I liked your conclusion when you noted if we should rebuild the Ark.
Your intention to start the world all over again? If you did, at what point of mans current history do you think the world would start over at?

That's something to ponder. Well written my friend. Thought provoking for sure. John

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2014

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thanks John

Comment from lindalcreel

Excellent

They say that the great flood came about because Lucifer and the fallen angels mated with mortal women and created an army of Nephylim. Fearing that Heaven would be attacked a second time, God decided to erase the world and start over so to speak. Not sure if this is true, but it makes sense to me. Of course, I'm a believer. LOL

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2014

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thank you

reply by lindalcreel on 17-Aug-2014

My pleasure:)

Comment from desire333

Good

This was pretty interesting. When reading, I felt this sort of rage from somewhere within, with a touch of sadness, of wanting to change what's going on in the world.

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Comment from Raphael Montonaro

Excellent

The questions posed in this poem is relevant. I feel your anger within it and I join you! Very well written by "deepwater". Thank you for posting this!

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2014

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Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

A very thought-provoking piece, well constructed. I especially liked the "rebuild the ark" line.

Very well done piece.

Thank you for the posting.

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Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is another great writing you have done. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery. The artwork is great also. Hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2014

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thanks Teni

Comment from Sandisan

Excellent

A heartfelt view of our world today, pondering which way the world will go. I found this to be very well written and an in depth view of our struggles on this planet.

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Comment from gypsymoth

Excellent

You should have written this a generation ago. I can't imagine this generation putting down their electronic devices to pick up a hammer and saw to build an ark to save us. Your poem to me is like a quiet scream for mankind to save themselves. I don't know if that's what you intended but that's what I read. I find it sad and profound.

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Comment from hari anand

Excellent

Will humanity arise? Seriously this is the biggest question or I must say a root cause of all problems we are facing today, power games are ruining the whole pupose of life. Great thoughts.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2014

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thank you