Erotic Dreams
Fantasy or Reality21 total reviews
Comment from Chocolate Chip
I liked the way you brought Jen into this part of the story. Even though Jake has convinced himself he's moved on, he REALLY hasn't & you wrote that beautifully. The style in which you write is very inviting & works well with this type of storytelling. Continued success & I'll be reading!
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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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I liked the way you brought Jen into this part of the story. Even though Jake has convinced himself he's moved on, he REALLY hasn't & you wrote that beautifully. The style in which you write is very inviting & works well with this type of storytelling. Continued success & I'll be reading!
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Thank you very much. Yes, sometimes an Ex can do that you.
