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Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Barbara - this keeps the tension at hand to figure out what has happened to Paige - great historical data too on the underground railroad.
I found this well penned and keeps me engaged with the plot.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Dear Barbara - this keeps the tension at hand to figure out what has happened to Paige - great historical data too on the underground railroad.
I found this well penned and keeps me engaged with the plot.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both,
Comment from Gungalo
The boys heard a dog so they must follow their lead. Meanwhile, another cave in happens and Cash saves Amos's life. Sigh they are headed for the cellar.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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The boys heard a dog so they must follow their lead. Meanwhile, another cave in happens and Cash saves Amos's life. Sigh they are headed for the cellar.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both.
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Smiling Barb.
Comment from Dawn Munro
There's a ton of action in this part, Barbara, and it's a great continuation of the other parts - a definite adventure, full of suspense.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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There's a ton of action in this part, Barbara, and it's a great continuation of the other parts - a definite adventure, full of suspense.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both.
Comment from forestport12
I've always loved your writing Barbara. To be so prolific and write with quality is one of many things I admire. I have a hard time with writing authentic dialogue like that and Lee, (Humpwhistle) is so good at it as you are. The underground Railroad in our upstate NY area is some history. We have homes all over that have secret stairs and doorways etc...Makes for an interesting plot.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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I've always loved your writing Barbara. To be so prolific and write with quality is one of many things I admire. I have a hard time with writing authentic dialogue like that and Lee, (Humpwhistle) is so good at it as you are. The underground Railroad in our upstate NY area is some history. We have homes all over that have secret stairs and doorways etc...Makes for an interesting plot.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both. I am honored that you compared my dialogue to Lee's. WOW!!
Comment from NaughtieScribe
You are killing me with this short chapter (tease - uh). Is the tunnel really in danger of flooding? Was that Morgan barking or Dog's echos? Where the heck is Paige, and did she find the treasure (knowing Paige she literally fell ontop of it)? Where's the rest of my chapter, you owe me. Uh I'm having readers anxiety. All your fault - lol.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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You are killing me with this short chapter (tease - uh). Is the tunnel really in danger of flooding? Was that Morgan barking or Dog's echos? Where the heck is Paige, and did she find the treasure (knowing Paige she literally fell ontop of it)? Where's the rest of my chapter, you owe me. Uh I'm having readers anxiety. All your fault - lol.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bar
You are keeping us hanging but the way you are doing it, I like it.
Chapter filled with mystery and suspense
Like the way Amos speaks.
Gert
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Hello Bar
You are keeping us hanging but the way you are doing it, I like it.
Chapter filled with mystery and suspense
Like the way Amos speaks.
Gert
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
You're keeping us hanging, Barbara! Good dialogue, as usual. This is quite the adventure - what a great story! All the secrets waiting to be discovered. Can't wait to see where this tunnel ends up.
Well done,
Av
"You saying there's a creek in here too(?) - I think this is a question, but your call.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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You're keeping us hanging, Barbara! Good dialogue, as usual. This is quite the adventure - what a great story! All the secrets waiting to be discovered. Can't wait to see where this tunnel ends up.
Well done,
Av
"You saying there's a creek in here too(?) - I think this is a question, but your call.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both.
Comment from Zue65
Finding Paige and Morgan in that tunnel is definitely tough especially with the heavy run. The possibility that the search party's lives are at risk is obviously high. But the bark of a dog is welcome relief and lead to finally find Paige. your story is packed with tension and it made the reading more exciting. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Finding Paige and Morgan in that tunnel is definitely tough especially with the heavy run. The possibility that the search party's lives are at risk is obviously high. But the bark of a dog is welcome relief and lead to finally find Paige. your story is packed with tension and it made the reading more exciting. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Norbanus
Yeah! Morgan to the rescue! Lots of tension and excitement in this segment, Barbara. But Billy Joe, a southern boy, not knowing the phrase 'if the creek don't rise' is a bit too much to swallow.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Yeah! Morgan to the rescue! Lots of tension and excitement in this segment, Barbara. But Billy Joe, a southern boy, not knowing the phrase 'if the creek don't rise' is a bit too much to swallow.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both. Billy Joe does some strange things and I think he was worried about drowning.
Comment from barkingdog
This is both exciting and tense as they look for Paige in the underground tunnels that were used years ago for slave escapes to the north.
With Morgan barking, they have a good chance of finding her. You're using the dogs well, making them an important part of the story. Not just pets. Way to go!
- Dank ya, Bradley. Did you mean 'Dang ya, Bradley.'?
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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This is both exciting and tense as they look for Paige in the underground tunnels that were used years ago for slave escapes to the north.
With Morgan barking, they have a good chance of finding her. You're using the dogs well, making them an important part of the story. Not just pets. Way to go!
- Dank ya, Bradley. Did you mean 'Dang ya, Bradley.'?
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both. I meant Thank you or as Amos says Dank ya.
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I misread that.Sorry.
And you're more than welcome. :) e
