Savannah Love
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Comment from kashmayank
I have read a few chapters of this work and it is a nice read the good thing is that it is smooth to follow and continues read all the best
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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I have read a few chapters of this work and it is a nice read the good thing is that it is smooth to follow and continues read all the best
Comment Written 06-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Stalking Wolf
Cash and Paige slowly being pushed together by their friends, doesn't seem to matter much. Wondering what all the extra noise in the house is, bet this will be great, enjoying.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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Cash and Paige slowly being pushed together by their friends, doesn't seem to matter much. Wondering what all the extra noise in the house is, bet this will be great, enjoying.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Janie King
They say that people who find they have their house built on an ancient buriel ground experience all kinds of things like this..good chapter. God bless.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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They say that people who find they have their house built on an ancient buriel ground experience all kinds of things like this..good chapter. God bless.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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I have heard that too. This ghost will present him/herself soon. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I really enjoyed this chapter until they herd a bump in the night! You are just naughty for leaving your reader hanging like that. (smile) Sometimes I wish the ghost would show himself then I hope he doesn't. Great chapter....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Hi Barbara,
I really enjoyed this chapter until they herd a bump in the night! You are just naughty for leaving your reader hanging like that. (smile) Sometimes I wish the ghost would show himself then I hope he doesn't. Great chapter....blessings, chey
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Uh, oh! Ghosts! It's going to be fun to watch Cash when he comes face to face with the resident shade. I think he's going to be scared stupid! Great transition, Barbara. :) nancy
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Uh, oh! Ghosts! It's going to be fun to watch Cash when he comes face to face with the resident shade. I think he's going to be scared stupid! Great transition, Barbara. :) nancy
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from essence56
I would have given another six star, however, I am almost out of how many I can use. smile.. I know you will come back with more and I want to have some left for my favorite writer. I am in suspence now, sho is in the house? I love this storyline and the characters. I am trying to figure out Mary Pat though. Very good. Wish I could write good like this one. Thank you.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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I would have given another six star, however, I am almost out of how many I can use. smile.. I know you will come back with more and I want to have some left for my favorite writer. I am in suspence now, sho is in the house? I love this storyline and the characters. I am trying to figure out Mary Pat though. Very good. Wish I could write good like this one. Thank you.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from irishauthorme
Hi Barbara, to do you justice I went back and read from the first chapter so I could get a feel for the story. This is a very well told and well written narrative. The setting, the characters, their dialogue and events all fit together seamlessly. I am also very impressed by the amount of research you must have done on the Civil War and the city itself. The many grand old houses that are still there and have a mixed history add so much interest and authenticity to your story. The slowly developing affection between Paige and Cash is very well done, and you created a believable villain in Paige's boss, adding even more tension to compliment the haunting Paige is experiencing.
I watched the video of Alan Jackson playing "Good Time" for the line dancers. I am also a huge fan of his, and a country music fan, period. Played lead guitar in many country bands over the years and was privileged to have played live performances with Ray Price, Bobby Bear, and Marty Robbins. Mostly retired now, but still do a few 'sit-ins' with local bands.
This is a great story, I will keep up with subsequent chapters.
Cheers, irish
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Hi Barbara, to do you justice I went back and read from the first chapter so I could get a feel for the story. This is a very well told and well written narrative. The setting, the characters, their dialogue and events all fit together seamlessly. I am also very impressed by the amount of research you must have done on the Civil War and the city itself. The many grand old houses that are still there and have a mixed history add so much interest and authenticity to your story. The slowly developing affection between Paige and Cash is very well done, and you created a believable villain in Paige's boss, adding even more tension to compliment the haunting Paige is experiencing.
I watched the video of Alan Jackson playing "Good Time" for the line dancers. I am also a huge fan of his, and a country music fan, period. Played lead guitar in many country bands over the years and was privileged to have played live performances with Ray Price, Bobby Bear, and Marty Robbins. Mostly retired now, but still do a few 'sit-ins' with local bands.
This is a great story, I will keep up with subsequent chapters.
Cheers, irish
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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How Wonderful!!!!! Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
Your latest chapter is fabulously written.
Your great narrative painted atrong imagery in the readers head.
Your dialogue between Paige and Cash is excellent.
Paige asks Billy Joe to come over to help Cash put up her big screen TV so they can order pizza and watch football on her 50 inch.
The noise of laughter wasn't Billy Joe that Paige, Cash and Mary Pat.
I'd recommend your highly entertaning chapter to other reviewers as a "must" read.
Keep on writing rocking chapters, my friend.
Please have a teriffic week,
Love ya,
Melissa.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Barbara,
Your latest chapter is fabulously written.
Your great narrative painted atrong imagery in the readers head.
Your dialogue between Paige and Cash is excellent.
Paige asks Billy Joe to come over to help Cash put up her big screen TV so they can order pizza and watch football on her 50 inch.
The noise of laughter wasn't Billy Joe that Paige, Cash and Mary Pat.
I'd recommend your highly entertaning chapter to other reviewers as a "must" read.
Keep on writing rocking chapters, my friend.
Please have a teriffic week,
Love ya,
Melissa.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Another enjoyable chapter, Barbara,
with great attention to detail ...
Cash and Paige are being drawn closer together .
My young'uns (will)be expecting - unless deliberate as the style of speaking, of course
His muscles bulge(d)
Margaret
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Another enjoyable chapter, Barbara,
with great attention to detail ...
Cash and Paige are being drawn closer together .
My young'uns (will)be expecting - unless deliberate as the style of speaking, of course
His muscles bulge(d)
Margaret
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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The first one is deliberate, the second on is not, and I'' fix it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Writingfundimension
Ooh, I just love the ghostly presences and now there's even more witnesses. The romance slowly simmers between Cash and Paige. An excellent chapter, barbara.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Ooh, I just love the ghostly presences and now there's even more witnesses. The romance slowly simmers between Cash and Paige. An excellent chapter, barbara.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, barbara.
