Love Songs For Every Heart
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Comment from Dodey
Just lovely, Great imagery from your well chosen words and spot on rhyming that makes for great reading.. This line
(love that you still have your fingers) following on from the second stanza had me giggling..Bravo, lovely poem telling of the fun times of love ...Kind Regards to You..Dee.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Just lovely, Great imagery from your well chosen words and spot on rhyming that makes for great reading.. This line
(love that you still have your fingers) following on from the second stanza had me giggling..Bravo, lovely poem telling of the fun times of love ...Kind Regards to You..Dee.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thanks so much Dee. I liked what you said about the fun times of love. Those are so important, to keep the sparks flying. :p
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My pleasure my Friend..Smiles and kind Regards to you...Dee.
Comment from RJ
A wonderful poem, it was nice to be reminded that two in love are full of electrical sparks like your picture, It flowed well with the rhymes. I looked up quarks and found that it was a great choice. RJ
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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A wonderful poem, it was nice to be reminded that two in love are full of electrical sparks like your picture, It flowed well with the rhymes. I looked up quarks and found that it was a great choice. RJ
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thanks for your kind an generous review. I'm glad you liked my choice of quarks. This was a fun poem to create. I'm so glad you liked it.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
The message is both interesting and compelling. The rhyming quatrains work well with the graphics to add allure to the poem. The piece presents a lovely word picture with embedded imagery. Curtis
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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The message is both interesting and compelling. The rhyming quatrains work well with the graphics to add allure to the poem. The piece presents a lovely word picture with embedded imagery. Curtis
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank you for this review, Curtis. I like the specific things you list. This was so nice to receive.
Comment from EMB
LOL This was a very adorable piece of poetry. And I loved how you immediately went to the literal with the "sparks." Through your fine examples and imagery, it's easy to see how your love is still filled with energy.
Nice work.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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LOL This was a very adorable piece of poetry. And I loved how you immediately went to the literal with the "sparks." Through your fine examples and imagery, it's easy to see how your love is still filled with energy.
Nice work.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank you for such an understanding review, Edward. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I also enjoyed your fun comments. Glad you found it amusing.
Comment from Cindy Warren
That's cute. That fellow is lucky to still have all his fingers. That little joke could end up being quite painful. LOL It sounds like he has a wonderful sense of humor and he's fun to have around.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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That's cute. That fellow is lucky to still have all his fingers. That little joke could end up being quite painful. LOL It sounds like he has a wonderful sense of humor and he's fun to have around.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thanks Cindy. Yep... that is a dangerous game to play. And you are right, he's been fun to have around for many years now. That was just one 'trick' that was so unexpected at the time, it cracked me up, but there have been many others. I never know what to expect. He also says crazy-funny things too, always unexpected.
Comment from dmt1967
Its good when the spark is still alive in a love match I like the way it flowed and the picture is very cool as well thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Its good when the spark is still alive in a love match I like the way it flowed and the picture is very cool as well thank you for sharing
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your very nice review. I kinda liked that picture too. It was a lucky find.
Comment from Earl of Oxford
Hi, Adonna.
'fiend-buss' and 'charged quarks' are new to me. They're either American terms OR made-up fun ones by you. In any event, they're fun and fit the humour and sweet/playful love you express, perfectly.
'I love how, when company lingers,
you give me a nod and some pokes' - LOL!
Really enjoyed.
I'm not sure my latest will be your 'cup of tea', so I undrstand you skipping it. I'll try to come up with something more refined next. Note...I said, 'try'. LOL
Best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Hi, Adonna.
'fiend-buss' and 'charged quarks' are new to me. They're either American terms OR made-up fun ones by you. In any event, they're fun and fit the humour and sweet/playful love you express, perfectly.
'I love how, when company lingers,
you give me a nod and some pokes' - LOL!
Really enjoyed.
I'm not sure my latest will be your 'cup of tea', so I undrstand you skipping it. I'll try to come up with something more refined next. Note...I said, 'try'. LOL
Best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Hello friend Ray. Thank you for your very nice review. I did read your post and was at a loss how to review it, so I didn't, but your next few I will get to, I promise. Life is very crazy for me right now, as we plan to leave for Arizona Tuesday.
I appreciate your consistent reading and reviewing. I know you are very busy right now too. Hope all is going well with the new little boy.
Comment from Katherine2
Your poem is so refreshing. So many poems are about unrequited love and sorrow, it is nice to read something so cute and airy. The lightening bolts dancing really made the poem. I love your rhyming technique as well. Thanks for brightening my day.~Katherine
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Your poem is so refreshing. So many poems are about unrequited love and sorrow, it is nice to read something so cute and airy. The lightening bolts dancing really made the poem. I love your rhyming technique as well. Thanks for brightening my day.~Katherine
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thanks for telling me I brightened your day. You certainly brightened my evening with this very kind and encouraging review.
Hugs, MM
Comment from twinklepoems
This is a very clever poem! I like how well you relate the electric charge between the two people as electric charge from the carpet. Then you go on to show the connection that keeps you together beyond the "carpet" charge! (of course I have to wonder about fingers in mouth while eating!) I like how you came full circle back to the crazy hot sparks and charged quarks. Great word!
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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This is a very clever poem! I like how well you relate the electric charge between the two people as electric charge from the carpet. Then you go on to show the connection that keeps you together beyond the "carpet" charge! (of course I have to wonder about fingers in mouth while eating!) I like how you came full circle back to the crazy hot sparks and charged quarks. Great word!
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much twinkle. I'm so glad you enjoyed this bit of fun.
