Comment from cheyennewy

Excellent

Hi Jim,

This is a creepy poem that gave me chills up and down my spine. It is well written and your rhyming couplets are effective. I'm thinking it is the devil who is the creature in the night. This is a great poem and one I enjoyed reading....chey
I am glad you promoted this poem, Jim. It is wonderful!

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 Comment Written 12-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012

thanks chey. iwas bored without sports so i wrote this in twenty minutes. now i'm bored again.

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012

thanks chey. iwas bored without sports so i wrote this in twenty minutes. now i'm bored again.

reply by cheyennewy on 12-Jan-2012

Oh no...think of something else to write...don't want you being bored!

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012

do you think this is good enough to promote?

reply by cheyennewy on 12-Jan-2012

I do think you should promotw it. I think it is excellent and would have given it a six if I had one!