Stairway to Heaven
A Whitney-please see notes.26 total reviews
Comment from peggles
what a lovely thought this is
very well composed
I could see god in his heaven saying
thank goodness
about time
I enjoyed reading this very much
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2012
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what a lovely thought this is
very well composed
I could see god in his heaven saying
thank goodness
about time
I enjoyed reading this very much
Comment Written 04-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2012
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peggles my friend, I like your review, made me smile, appreciate it very much, thank you and God bless.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I liked this specialized poem - Whitney - a 7 line poem with a syllable count of 3/4/3/4/3/4/7.
It has a balanced natural free flow of thoughts.
I enjoyed the free verse order with metaphysical and supernatural word imageries and word visuals with intensity of purpose to appeal the message.
It was a pleasant way to heaven read.
ALCREATOR LITTERATEUR
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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2012
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I liked this specialized poem - Whitney - a 7 line poem with a syllable count of 3/4/3/4/3/4/7.
It has a balanced natural free flow of thoughts.
I enjoyed the free verse order with metaphysical and supernatural word imageries and word visuals with intensity of purpose to appeal the message.
It was a pleasant way to heaven read.
ALCREATOR LITTERATEUR
040112/23205
Comment Written 04-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2012
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AlcreatorLitterateur, my friend I appreciate your visit and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
The last line made me chuckle slightly, not that I think it's funny but probably will never happen. A lovely thought and a brightly coloured and well written whitney.
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The last line made me chuckle slightly, not that I think it's funny but probably will never happen. A lovely thought and a brightly coloured and well written whitney.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2012
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Hello Pearl, my friend, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from amarherig14
Well written and a good thought.It would be the greatest wish of all, people joining hands like one, no prejudice, hate or wars. Love filled people ,for God and the rest of the human race.Good luck.
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Well written and a good thought.It would be the greatest wish of all, people joining hands like one, no prejudice, hate or wars. Love filled people ,for God and the rest of the human race.Good luck.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2012
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Hello amarherig, my friend, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
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You are welcome. warm regards,amarherig14
Comment from Chris Tee
This is an absolutely sweet and serene Whitney we have here from you competent pen old sport.
Well done with this splendid work here Kamran.
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This is an absolutely sweet and serene Whitney we have here from you competent pen old sport.
Well done with this splendid work here Kamran.
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2012
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Chris my friend, I am very happy that you like the poem, thank you very much sir and God bless you.
Comment from fionageorge
Yes, if that ever happened, I am sure it would be a surprise to everyone, including God. (Love the artwork - so appropriate). Thanks for sharing this well structured Whitney poem. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
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Yes, if that ever happened, I am sure it would be a surprise to everyone, including God. (Love the artwork - so appropriate). Thanks for sharing this well structured Whitney poem. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2012
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Hello Marijke, my friend, I appreciate your time and the wonderful, thoughtful review, thank you very much.
