Comment from gazzagodbod

Excellent

yup you cant get a stronger message than this one my friend great picture and a great poem my friend thanks for sharing gazzaxx

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011

Thanks so much for your kind review,Take care and have a lovely weekend, Ine.

Comment from Hareem.S

Excellent

Robina you have conveyed a very important message in some very clear words. A very well meaning and lucid poem. And it's nice to get acquainted with the form Sedoka. Enjoyed reading it!

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011

Thanks so much for your kind review,Take care and have a lovely weekend, Ine.

Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

Great poem Robina I liked the flow
I wrote a poem called I PASS to Hell
A few months ago
A bit twisted but funny
Loved your imagery as well
Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011

Thanks so much for your kind review,Take care and have a lovely weekend, Ine. 2 peple one thought sometimes

Comment from rchitwood

Excellent

Very good poem and I enjoyed reading it.Your poem reminds us how easy it is to sin and the quick way to hell's gate.Very good lesson in your poem my friend.Your photo goes well with your poem.Blessings Rita

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011

Thanks so much for your kind review,Take care and have a lovely weekend, Ine.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

there issurly a message within youyr poem
You may have a ticket to ride but to where
Thouggh the poem is short you got your message across. thank yuo for sharing

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011

Thanks so much for your kind review,Take care and have a lovely weekend, Ine.

reply by misscookie on 23-Oct-2011

Your welcome I had a marelous week end that you

Comment from ephraim crud, COS.

Excellent

i thought sedoku were a numbers puzzle, lol.
very nicely done, Dutchess Ine.
i see nowt that i'd change, except
i'd best start reading the bible, methinks,
or mayhaps i'm doomed already.
thank you for sharing.
warmly, xx, eph.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011

Thanks so much for your kind review,Take care and have a lovely weekend, Ine. I might be as well-LOL. Don't know who will decide in the end.

reply by ephraim crud, COS. on 22-Oct-2011

ME! so take care, be very careful! lol. have a good one too, dear Ine.
xx, eph.

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Great form. Excellent theme, your poem says it like it is, if your going to go against what's written as our code to live by, you're going straight to hell.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011

Thanks so much for your kind review,Take care and have a lovely weekend, Ine.

Comment from Yvette Wilson

Excellent

I have to honestly say even though I'm Catholic I have never read the bible. I'm actually afraid to tackle it. The flow is nice and the art was a great fit for the poem.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011

Thanks so much for your kind review,Take care and have a lovely weekend, Ine. I only read a very tiny bit as well and am baptised Protestant.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Very nicely written. And I love the colors you used, and the picture is just perfect. My mother reads her Bible everyday. I'm not quit like her, but stay as close to God as I can. A small poem with a big meaning.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011

Thanks so much for your kind review,Take care and have a lovely weekend, Ine. I don't either, so don't worry.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, robina, a great job writing this sedoka poem about the choices we make. you did this very well and the picture was great. Jacob's ladder is referenced in 28:12. i keep forgetting about it. my only recommendation is there's supposed to be a space after the first stanza

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011

Thanks so much for your kind review,Take care and have a lovely weekend, Ine. The one I copied from did not have one. Do you know if it should? And do you know for sure?

reply by sweetwoodjax on 22-Oct-2011

the ones i've always seen here are separated. the ones i googled are not. i just think it shows the separate ways of telling the same subject