Comment from Diny

Excellent

I am not familar with this style- I need to go to the contest link and research more- But I do know what I like -- this picture is captured in your discription as a poem and I liked that- Di

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011

Thanks so much Di, for reading and reviewing...I am glad you liked it...blessings.

Comment from Enrique28

Excellent

This fine little verse appears to be about nature, before the sharp turn that gives it a romantic twist. It is beautifully presented and filled with poetic tones. Well done!

Enrique

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011

Thanks so much Enrique, for reading and reviewing...I am glad you enjoyed it...blessings.

Comment from ameen786

Excellent

And I fall into passion's sweet abyss---what a beautiful line my friend, superb poetry with lovely verses and excellent rhyming, all the best.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011

Thanks so much ameen786, for your words...blessings.

Comment from ELumpkins

Excellent

A wonderful poem. It makes one feel like going on a hike in a peaceful place. The author did an outstanding job of rhythm and rhyme. Bringing all those wonderful sights and smells. I love nature and this is a perfect picture of what is best about nature. Good luck

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011

Thanks so much ELumpkins, for your wonderful review...blessings.

Comment from Mara del Mar

Excellent

A poem beautiful, of excellent fluidity and good rhythm with great images sensorial and very sensual. I liked the description of landscape, very colorful. Congrats, I loved.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011

Thanks so much Mara del Mar, for reading and reviewing...I am glad you enjoyed it...blessings.

Comment from allborn66

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem. I like the mental imagery that it invokes. I like the word choice. The poem has a wonderful flow.
Barbara

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011

Thanks so much Barbara, for reading and reviewing...I am glad you enjoyed it...blessings.

Comment from angel123

Excellent

Your poem flows and rhymes very well and I enjoyed reading it. It is well written and it expresses your love of nature. Your artwork choice is beautiful and it enhances your poem.

Angel123

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011

Thanks so much Angel123, for reading and reviewing...I am glad you enjoyed it...blessings.

Comment from poetparman

Excellent

A lovely garden to fall into passion's embrace. Lovely romance poem. I meet your eyes, desire stirs within. There is a knowing when eyes lock in an embrace before hands are even touched. thanks for sharing a lovely poem.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011

Thanks so much poetparman, for reading and reviewing...so true...there is a knowing...blessings.

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

This is the nicest poem I've read this evening. It has good rhyme and meter and a beautiful message. Thank you for sharing something uplifting!

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011

Thanks so much mumsyone, for your words...blessings.

Comment from Kaine Darcwater

Excellent

Enchanting indeed. The photo is beautiful and fits your poem perfect. The emotions this poem brought over me as I read it were numerous. If a place like that exists I want to visit there one day. The only thing that would help it flow better is if you changed 'fills' to 'fill.' Kudos. ;)

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011

Thanks so much Bryan Skylar, for your wonderful review...blessings