Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Chapter 9; part one"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from Tellis
This was another great chapter and I hope she finds the right color soon. I enjoyed this piece and we're all rooting for you in the chemo. I know it's rough so we'll understand when you don't feel well enough to post something.
Tellis
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2010
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This was another great chapter and I hope she finds the right color soon. I enjoyed this piece and we're all rooting for you in the chemo. I know it's rough so we'll understand when you don't feel well enough to post something.
Tellis
Comment Written 26-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2010
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I am one of those women who worry about letting people down. I am afraid if I don't post, I will let my readers down. Thank you for the review and the encouragement.
Comment from Roberta Joan Jensen
I talked to a "gypsy" friend of mine the other day. (They are RVers.) She had cancer and went through chemo. She just celebrated her tenth anniversary of being cancer free.
"I'm not." He [attempted,]
"When we first discussed painting this room[,] you said you liked blue."
look good in 'Peppermint Vinca[.']"
Roberta
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2010
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I talked to a "gypsy" friend of mine the other day. (They are RVers.) She had cancer and went through chemo. She just celebrated her tenth anniversary of being cancer free.
"I'm not." He [attempted,]
"When we first discussed painting this room[,] you said you liked blue."
look good in 'Peppermint Vinca[.']"
Roberta
Comment Written 25-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from livingwords
What is 'suicide by cop'? Also, why is GEORGE capitalized? Oops, sounds like I'm criticizing. Obviously, my rating proves I'm not. I love your style. Me questions are elementary. Dan :))
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2010
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What is 'suicide by cop'? Also, why is GEORGE capitalized? Oops, sounds like I'm criticizing. Obviously, my rating proves I'm not. I love your style. Me questions are elementary. Dan :))
Comment Written 25-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2010
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Suicide my cop is when a person would rather die than go to jail or be questioned. It happens often. My husband was a CID agent in the military.
Comment from Ted T
Hi Barbara :)
Good work on this chapter. Nice dialogue exchanges and good pacing.
Excellent sequence with the bloody shirt and Joe's reactions.
I still have trouble with the "painting" but I guess it's the only way Sara has to cope with the crisis.
Good luck with your therapy.
Ted
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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Hi Barbara :)
Good work on this chapter. Nice dialogue exchanges and good pacing.
Excellent sequence with the bloody shirt and Joe's reactions.
I still have trouble with the "painting" but I guess it's the only way Sara has to cope with the crisis.
Good luck with your therapy.
Ted
Comment Written 25-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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It is Sara's way of coping. Thank you for your kind review.
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You're welcome :)
Comment from Wolfwind
Your story was very enjoyable and I can't wait until I have time to read more. I know I will be wondering later, as I lie in bed, do they find Cassie? I have found over the years that it takes a great writer to haunt me until I've finished the story and sometimes for days after. You have done this, so I have to add you to my list of great writers.
Good luck with the chemo. I'll say a blessing for you.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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Your story was very enjoyable and I can't wait until I have time to read more. I know I will be wondering later, as I lie in bed, do they find Cassie? I have found over the years that it takes a great writer to haunt me until I've finished the story and sometimes for days after. You have done this, so I have to add you to my list of great writers.
Good luck with the chemo. I'll say a blessing for you.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your blessing. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from dmjones
Hi Barbara, This is a good chapter. I hope they hurry up and find Cassia but I like how you are drawing out the suspense. I'll be praying for you when you go for Chemo. Warm regards, Donna
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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Hi Barbara, This is a good chapter. I hope they hurry up and find Cassia but I like how you are drawing out the suspense. I'll be praying for you when you go for Chemo. Warm regards, Donna
Comment Written 25-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your prayers. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from bhogg
Hi Barbara - this was an excellent continuation of your marvelous story. You get me engaged so easily and naturally when you write. You are truly gifted.
You are on my prayer list at church, but you'll get a personal one on Thursday. Warm regards, Bill
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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Hi Barbara - this was an excellent continuation of your marvelous story. You get me engaged so easily and naturally when you write. You are truly gifted.
You are on my prayer list at church, but you'll get a personal one on Thursday. Warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 25-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your prayers. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from pickthorn
I like the realism in your story and the personalities you have created for both Joe and Sara. This was an interesting chapter. The disappearance of Cassie shows in the strain on the relationship between Joe and Sara. Good job of writing. You will be in my thoughts and prayers this coming Thursday. Keep your chin up. I know you are strong and are going to come through all of this with flying colors. God bless.
pickthorn
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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I like the realism in your story and the personalities you have created for both Joe and Sara. This was an interesting chapter. The disappearance of Cassie shows in the strain on the relationship between Joe and Sara. Good job of writing. You will be in my thoughts and prayers this coming Thursday. Keep your chin up. I know you are strong and are going to come through all of this with flying colors. God bless.
pickthorn
Comment Written 25-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your prayers. I appreciate your kind review.
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You're welcome Barbara. Take care and I will be thinking of you.
Gary
Comment from M.L. Gardner
You did a good job with this. You set the tension level well and displayed that through your characters. You can feel their stress and worry.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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You did a good job with this. You set the tension level well and displayed that through your characters. You can feel their stress and worry.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Mary Faucheux
Chapter moved along smoothly. Dialogue was good and the characters believable. Great read and I look forward to more.
Mary
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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Chapter moved along smoothly. Dialogue was good and the characters believable. Great read and I look forward to more.
Mary
Comment Written 25-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
