Wee Fairies Flitted Through the Sky
a fantasy80 total reviews
Comment from The Highlander
Sweet, delightful and charming little poem Brooke. Elves and pixies are a joy to write about. The picture is wonderfully colourful and it goes so well with your words, James.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Sweet, delightful and charming little poem Brooke. Elves and pixies are a joy to write about. The picture is wonderfully colourful and it goes so well with your words, James.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Thank you, James, for your most gracious comments :-) Brooke
Comment from Realist101
HI Brooke!! I love this! It rhymes perfectly, and is so much fun to read, it would be a great children's poem for a book?? Just excellent!! :) Susan
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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HI Brooke!! I love this! It rhymes perfectly, and is so much fun to read, it would be a great children's poem for a book?? Just excellent!! :) Susan
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Thank you, Susan. I do hope to put my fairy poems into an illustrated book some day :-) brooke
Comment from Oatmeal
adewpearl,
The theme was strong. The flow was smooth. Very descriptive and created impressions that are very vivid and understandable.
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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adewpearl,
The theme was strong. The flow was smooth. Very descriptive and created impressions that are very vivid and understandable.
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Thanks, Oatmeal, for your kind review :-) Brooke
Comment from lola29
Brooke, I missed that beautiful sighting, but you allowed me to envision it vicariously through your wonderful poem. I love these little escapes.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Brooke, I missed that beautiful sighting, but you allowed me to envision it vicariously through your wonderful poem. I love these little escapes.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Thanks so much, Lola :-) Brooke
Comment from Begin Again
Brooke,
What whimsy and so full of fun...I really enjoyed the light hearted feeling with the pixies adding sparkle to the day. No question why they chose you...they knew they'd found the perfect poet to express their joy and add it to our day...Terrific!
Carol
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Brooke,
What whimsy and so full of fun...I really enjoyed the light hearted feeling with the pixies adding sparkle to the day. No question why they chose you...they knew they'd found the perfect poet to express their joy and add it to our day...Terrific!
Carol
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Thank you, Carol - what a sweet thing to say :-) Brooke
Comment from Kathryn Varuzza
Brooke,
Nice poem.
Who doesn't like fairies.
This was fun and lighthearted.
What an incredible image, so very beautiful.
Nice message too.
My favorite parts: 2nd stanza, and the last 2 lines of the last stanza.
Great job.
Kathryn
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Brooke,
Nice poem.
Who doesn't like fairies.
This was fun and lighthearted.
What an incredible image, so very beautiful.
Nice message too.
My favorite parts: 2nd stanza, and the last 2 lines of the last stanza.
Great job.
Kathryn
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Thank you, Kathryn. There are actually a few grumps who don't. LOL Brooke :-)
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You're welcome Brooke, what? people who don't like fairies?
Kathryn
Comment from Rick Koestler
I saw these pixies shimmering
with silver sparkles on each wing
till soon they formed a flick'ring ring
that set my heart aquivering
You drew me right into this fantasy. Super imagery... you made me believe they hide in my garden.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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I saw these pixies shimmering
with silver sparkles on each wing
till soon they formed a flick'ring ring
that set my heart aquivering
You drew me right into this fantasy. Super imagery... you made me believe they hide in my garden.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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That is probably because they DO hide in your garden, Rick! ;-)
Thanks, my friend. Brooke
Comment from WRITER1
This is cute. I do love fairies and such. I can see these little creatures flying around and telling you all the secrets they have.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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This is cute. I do love fairies and such. I can see these little creatures flying around and telling you all the secrets they have.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Thank you, Donna - so glad you love the wee folk too :-) Brooke
Comment from Sally Carter
Aw, this is so sweet, and with lovely imagery of those glittering sparkling fairies waving at you as they say farewell.
I did falter slightly on the line with two "why"s in it. Don't know if you intended that or whether one could be removed, eg they chose me, though I wonder why?
Nonethless, a delightful read, which I am sure young and old alike will enjoy.
Yours. Sally
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Aw, this is so sweet, and with lovely imagery of those glittering sparkling fairies waving at you as they say farewell.
I did falter slightly on the line with two "why"s in it. Don't know if you intended that or whether one could be removed, eg they chose me, though I wonder why?
Nonethless, a delightful read, which I am sure young and old alike will enjoy.
Yours. Sally
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Thank you, Sally. I just got rid of one of the why's at Peter's suggestion - I think it works well - take a look : -) Brooke
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Definitely much better. Glad Peter made the same comment. Cheers. Sally
Comment from Treasuregirl
This is such a lovely poem. It has all the magic of Fairyland in it. A lovely flow and rhythm makes it easy to read, and I do like rhyming poetry. I loved it.
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This is such a lovely poem. It has all the magic of Fairyland in it. A lovely flow and rhythm makes it easy to read, and I do like rhyming poetry. I loved it.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
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Thanks so much for your generous review, Treasuregirl :-) My daughter is the world's biggest fairy fan, so I love writing fairy poetry :-) Brooke
