Mom and Dad Shortess
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Comment from gene_ink
There is some confusion as to whether we are writing short stories or poetry . . . but that's not your fault. Your poety is good, Teri7, with superb rhyms. Good luck with the contest.
Gene
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2008
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There is some confusion as to whether we are writing short stories or poetry . . . but that's not your fault. Your poety is good, Teri7, with superb rhyms. Good luck with the contest.
Gene
Comment Written 26-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2008
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Thank you for the review. Hugs, Teri
Comment from ulster3
Hello Teri.
It is great that you think so much of these folks. I like the quality of truth in you poem. Nothing ostentatious, just plain real! Excellent write. fondly, rebecca
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2008
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Hello Teri.
It is great that you think so much of these folks. I like the quality of truth in you poem. Nothing ostentatious, just plain real! Excellent write. fondly, rebecca
Comment Written 26-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2008
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Thank you my friend. It is a very true poem. Hugs, Teri
Comment from c_lucas
A vekry well written poem honoring your parents. It has a very good rhyming scheme that makes for an easy read. Very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2008
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A vekry well written poem honoring your parents. It has a very good rhyming scheme that makes for an easy read. Very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2008
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Thank you Charlie. These are my in-laws. Hugs, Teri
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You're welcome, Teri. Charlie
Comment from luna
Teri, your love for your family shines through in this well written poem. Thank you for sharing a piece of yourself with us, my friend. All the best.
Yours,
Jenny *smile*
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2008
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Teri, your love for your family shines through in this well written poem. Thank you for sharing a piece of yourself with us, my friend. All the best.
Yours,
Jenny *smile*
Comment Written 23-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2008
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Thank you for the review. Love, Teri
Comment from adewpearl
Lovely rhyming couplets enhance your memory poem of times spent visiting your in laws - you infuse your poem with love and warmth.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2008
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Lovely rhyming couplets enhance your memory poem of times spent visiting your in laws - you infuse your poem with love and warmth.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2008
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Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from earthlybeing
Sounds like a wonderful place to visit. Warm and welcoming and filled with love and fun. Enjoyed this well written poem. Thanks, Jeanette
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2008
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Sounds like a wonderful place to visit. Warm and welcoming and filled with love and fun. Enjoyed this well written poem. Thanks, Jeanette
Comment Written 22-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2008
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Thank you my friend. Love, Teri
Comment from Kym Jade
What a fantastic memory to be able to draw upon for strength this special time of the year. Hope you get a chance to catch up with them again soon.
Love and hugs
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2008
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What a fantastic memory to be able to draw upon for strength this special time of the year. Hope you get a chance to catch up with them again soon.
Love and hugs
Comment Written 22-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2008
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They were here for the wedding. Hugs, Teri
Comment from jlsavell
hi Teri7, this is a great writing prompt and it depicts a life of warm memories and love in a special time...best wishes on the prompt..jimi
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2008
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hi Teri7, this is a great writing prompt and it depicts a life of warm memories and love in a special time...best wishes on the prompt..jimi
Comment Written 22-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2008
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Thank you my friend. Love, Teri
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Teri
what a fun poem in rhyme to read.
So you took this trip when you were a child?
Nice that you have such happy memories and could write your poem with a smiles
Gert
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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2008
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Hi Teri
what a fun poem in rhyme to read.
So you took this trip when you were a child?
Nice that you have such happy memories and could write your poem with a smiles
Gert
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Comment Written 22-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2008
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Thank you Gert. Hugs, Teri
