Birthday Wishes: A New Day
Contest Entry: Multiple Tetractys33 total reviews
Comment from DJHughes
If someone were to send this to me on my birthday, I would be so very, very honored and my heart filled with joy for the love pouring forth from it. This was wonderful! Blessings and joy.
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If someone were to send this to me on my birthday, I would be so very, very honored and my heart filled with joy for the love pouring forth from it. This was wonderful! Blessings and joy.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2008
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
As always KT...great job! You know your stuff, Ms. Teach!
I am sorry for your friend, and I know this poem meant a lot to her. Thanks for sharing.
Penny
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As always KT...great job! You know your stuff, Ms. Teach!
I am sorry for your friend, and I know this poem meant a lot to her. Thanks for sharing.
Penny
Comment Written 06-Mar-2008
Comment from Bryana
Caring, lovely poem to a friend in need of friendship and understanding.
You did a wonderful job with this poem, the structure is awesome. The words of friendship, hope and love are beautiful for your friend who just lost her husband.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
Hugs,
Ana
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Caring, lovely poem to a friend in need of friendship and understanding.
You did a wonderful job with this poem, the structure is awesome. The words of friendship, hope and love are beautiful for your friend who just lost her husband.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
Hugs,
Ana
Comment Written 05-Mar-2008
Comment from skye
Beautiful poem, well written, adheres to the form and the message is so comforting.
Your friend will appreciate your talent. This is a lovely poem of friendship and caring.
Very well done.
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Beautiful poem, well written, adheres to the form and the message is so comforting.
Your friend will appreciate your talent. This is a lovely poem of friendship and caring.
Very well done.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2008
Comment from amada
This is a cleverly written poem, the shapely form makes it special. Artful, classy and it was a pleasure to read. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a cleverly written poem, the shapely form makes it special. Artful, classy and it was a pleasure to read. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2008
Comment from Just2Write
This is a nice poem that you have written for your friend. It would be such a nice gesture to give to here, especially after her husband has passed on. That is such a lonely time. Knowing that you care would mean so much.
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This is a nice poem that you have written for your friend. It would be such a nice gesture to give to here, especially after her husband has passed on. That is such a lonely time. Knowing that you care would mean so much.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2008
Comment from stealth2000
I loved this letter; this poem. It was excellent. It was displayed nicely. I can see that you've studied some poetry. Reading your author's notes and looking at the terminology brings to light past lessons of this humanity.
I gave you 5 stars because I feel it is polished and ready for publishing, if that's your goal. Good luck with your writing. Thanks for allowing me the opportunity to review.
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I loved this letter; this poem. It was excellent. It was displayed nicely. I can see that you've studied some poetry. Reading your author's notes and looking at the terminology brings to light past lessons of this humanity.
I gave you 5 stars because I feel it is polished and ready for publishing, if that's your goal. Good luck with your writing. Thanks for allowing me the opportunity to review.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2008
Comment from Victoria...
Sorry, this is a terrible entry for this contest. This is much too good for any Hallmark card. LOL.
I like this a lot. I like the shape and the sentiment. And I wish greeting cards were this good.
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Sorry, this is a terrible entry for this contest. This is much too good for any Hallmark card. LOL.
I like this a lot. I like the shape and the sentiment. And I wish greeting cards were this good.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2008
Comment from PoesyPoet
WOW! I just read two others that made me cry! This one just made me really let loose! This is so beautiful and I am wondering, Mrs. KT, if you'll send it to Emily.
What a fantastic entry. Best of luck!
PP
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WOW! I just read two others that made me cry! This one just made me really let loose! This is so beautiful and I am wondering, Mrs. KT, if you'll send it to Emily.
What a fantastic entry. Best of luck!
PP
Comment Written 05-Mar-2008
Comment from LynnRadford
Beautifully composed.
The reader can't help but feel the tenderness, as you conveyed it so well.
Great form.
Sincerely, Lynn Radford
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Beautifully composed.
The reader can't help but feel the tenderness, as you conveyed it so well.
Great form.
Sincerely, Lynn Radford
Comment Written 05-Mar-2008
