Dear Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Dear Wall"Addressing different themes in a form of a letter
35 total reviews
Comment from VICTIMEYES
very delightful poem, also very creative in the origin of though, you carried the images very well throughout the poem of the wall between us all, i like this, very interesting.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2007
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very delightful poem, also very creative in the origin of though, you carried the images very well throughout the poem of the wall between us all, i like this, very interesting.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2007
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Thanks ES for appreciating my writing. But I am glad that the wall between FS-ans are not that thick, we sometimes hear the cries and laughter.
Pupa
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi PUPA,
This one brings tears to my eyes. My parents are divorced and still living. I go daily to make sure my dad has food to eat and takes his medicine. My mom, although having had 4 surgeries, still gets around better than my dad. When I go to help them, I can't help but wonder how many older people out there has no one. It is heart breaking.
Your poem is beautifully written and your flow allows your meaning to be clear. Your choice of art adds meaning to your thoughts. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt write. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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Hi PUPA,
This one brings tears to my eyes. My parents are divorced and still living. I go daily to make sure my dad has food to eat and takes his medicine. My mom, although having had 4 surgeries, still gets around better than my dad. When I go to help them, I can't help but wonder how many older people out there has no one. It is heart breaking.
Your poem is beautifully written and your flow allows your meaning to be clear. Your choice of art adds meaning to your thoughts. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt write. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
Comment Written 14-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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I am so glad that my poem has touched you, this means so much to me. Yes it is vey sad, if they have no one to take care of them or vist.
Thanks for a lovely and encouraging review and rating.
Love
Pupa
Comment from alwaysSmiles
This poem is really appealling to me because of the great lines
but the nature and content stand out hugely for me, good goes this write.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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This poem is really appealling to me because of the great lines
but the nature and content stand out hugely for me, good goes this write.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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Oh, thank you so much for appreciating this poem. It means a lot to me.
Thanks also for the kind review and rating.
Pupa
Comment from gray horse
I am honored to have my photograph used with this beautiful and touching poem. How very true about the walls in our lives both the physical ones and emotional ones. I've none this feeling myself and I applaud this very sensitive expression of those emotions and feelings of isolation. ~ Sande / gray horse
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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I am honored to have my photograph used with this beautiful and touching poem. How very true about the walls in our lives both the physical ones and emotional ones. I've none this feeling myself and I applaud this very sensitive expression of those emotions and feelings of isolation. ~ Sande / gray horse
Comment Written 14-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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Sande, I am the one who is thanking you. Your artwork has truly complimented my poem. I am so glad you appreciated it and thanks for your lovely review and kind rating.
Pupa
Comment from DREAMGIRL
I love the picture here. It captures the poem so well.
The poem makes me sad because all of us fear that day. The day when our children that we spent all our adult lives taking care of worrying over etc etc never return or at least not enough to fill the void felt on their departure.
You captured all this and much more. Keep going.,well done.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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I love the picture here. It captures the poem so well.
The poem makes me sad because all of us fear that day. The day when our children that we spent all our adult lives taking care of worrying over etc etc never return or at least not enough to fill the void felt on their departure.
You captured all this and much more. Keep going.,well done.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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Dreamgirl, your very kind words are much appreciated, they are very encouraging and thanks for a kind rating.
Pupa
Comment from LovnPeace
I love reading a work that so well describes an everyday occurance about daily life as humans...this is so well done which takes a talent of it's own i believe...Blessings PUPA...L&P*
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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I love reading a work that so well describes an everyday occurance about daily life as humans...this is so well done which takes a talent of it's own i believe...Blessings PUPA...L&P*
Comment Written 14-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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L&P, thank you so much for appreciating this poem and for the kind review and rating. Havn't seen you for a while, are you ok?
Take care.
Pupa
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Yes, thank you dear lady for asking...I'm ok...Blessings ...Barbara
Comment from G-mom
When I worked at a convelencent home I would sit and listen to the best stories of those there. Youe wonderful poem brought back those nice memories. well written.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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When I worked at a convelencent home I would sit and listen to the best stories of those there. Youe wonderful poem brought back those nice memories. well written.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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Oh, it is really painful to see such lonely people. Thank you very much for your kind review and rating.
Pupa
Comment from garnbev
Good presentation and good flow. Your descriptions are vivid. It is full of great wording and very good imagery. I've nothing to critique. Nothing to change. Thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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Good presentation and good flow. Your descriptions are vivid. It is full of great wording and very good imagery. I've nothing to critique. Nothing to change. Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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Bev, Glad you liked it. Thank you so much for a lovely review and kind rating.
Pupa
Comment from angel of the quill
wonderful lay out
with both print and picture
and of course i enjoyed the poem the best
i do hear you sometimes about the wall
there are so many in our lives in and out
seen unseen
and the way you describe them makes them all the more vivid
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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wonderful lay out
with both print and picture
and of course i enjoyed the poem the best
i do hear you sometimes about the wall
there are so many in our lives in and out
seen unseen
and the way you describe them makes them all the more vivid
Comment Written 14-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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Angel, thank you for such a lovely review and kind rating. It means so much to me.
Glad you liked it.
Pupa
Comment from margyl
This is an incredible poem and even though you and your neighbor make fun of that wall, this is sad, because it really happens to some people. I'm sure you know that, hence the beautiful poem. Wonderful job, Pupa.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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This is an incredible poem and even though you and your neighbor make fun of that wall, this is sad, because it really happens to some people. I'm sure you know that, hence the beautiful poem. Wonderful job, Pupa.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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Hi margyl, thanks for a lovely review and kind rating.
We are making fun of 'ourselves', not of the wall, or else I wouldn't have thought of writing this poem.
Thanks again.
Pupa
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Yes, I knew you were making fun of yourselves. But, you captured the lives of many people (nursing homes, etc) who sadly watch for someone to come by. And, I don't mean to sound gloomy, but that's what I thought about. A wonderful and well presented poem. I enjoyed.
