The Aspen Grove Murders
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Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. And I am finally caught up. How easy it was to get the lawyer to the bad side. I do not see any need for improvement. have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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This is another excellent chapter. And I am finally caught up. How easy it was to get the lawyer to the bad side. I do not see any need for improvement. have a blessed day.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Thank you, Elizabeth! Sal XOs
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Sally this is such a great continuation to the story. It's so well thought out and I admire you for for the attention to detail. I can't wait to reading on. You know I love this story.
I only found a minor thing.:
Christmas Eve Eve. Remove one Eve. Hugs, Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
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Oh, Sally this is such a great continuation to the story. It's so well thought out and I admire you for for the attention to detail. I can't wait to reading on. You know I love this story.
I only found a minor thing.:
Christmas Eve Eve. Remove one Eve. Hugs, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous six star rating, my friend. Christmas Eve Eve is a thing now. In my author's notes I have put the reference.
Christmas Eve Eve: The day before Christmas Eve, 2 days before Christmas. Source: Urban Dictionary.
Love and blessings,
Sal XOs
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Wow, you have quite the well worked on piece. Here, I must say you've put a lot of effort into it as you have so far. And curious point with your story.
I like the accents you put on with your character. It gives the depth and givests realness. And I'm talking such a way that everybody would talk again. Adding more to the realness of your characters. It is obvious you are working hard on this book. And I also think it's going to be a success.
From whatever I've read so far. I see no issues with grammar or extensively written. And I quite enjoy your author's notes too. Which provides excellent description of characters. So good luck and I think it's a great submission. I wish you only the best!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Wow, you have quite the well worked on piece. Here, I must say you've put a lot of effort into it as you have so far. And curious point with your story.
I like the accents you put on with your character. It gives the depth and givests realness. And I'm talking such a way that everybody would talk again. Adding more to the realness of your characters. It is obvious you are working hard on this book. And I also think it's going to be a success.
From whatever I've read so far. I see no issues with grammar or extensively written. And I quite enjoy your author's notes too. Which provides excellent description of characters. So good luck and I think it's a great submission. I wish you only the best!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Lea, thank you for the lovely review of my book chapter. I am honored to have you stop by! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I sure hope Sally is on her A game. Fee cannot escape. I enjoyed reading and still believe this is your best one, yet.
He assured me it was damn-near impossible. (want to bet???)
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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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I sure hope Sally is on her A game. Fee cannot escape. I enjoyed reading and still believe this is your best one, yet.
He assured me it was damn-near impossible. (want to bet???)
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Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments. Both mean so much!
Blessings abundant,
Sal XOs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congrats first, Sally, on your poem of the month!
Well, all I can say here is - that conniving lawyer! He really has taken the bait and now scheming Fee's escape. This is actually an excellent plot introduced here and we have dramatic irony as the detectives work to solve the killings, totally oblivious of what's going on in the jail interview room! All building quite nicely, Sally! Well done! Debbie x
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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Congrats first, Sally, on your poem of the month!
Well, all I can say here is - that conniving lawyer! He really has taken the bait and now scheming Fee's escape. This is actually an excellent plot introduced here and we have dramatic irony as the detectives work to solve the killings, totally oblivious of what's going on in the jail interview room! All building quite nicely, Sally! Well done! Debbie x
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Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind good wishes. You seem to be the first one by to visit me, Debbie. My best to you too in your two wonderful poems. The committee rarely nominates two. It has happened to me on occasions but once in a blue moon! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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Thank you so much, Sally and congrats again on your well-deserved win! Take care, Debbie xoxo
