These old bones
A Kyreille for the Potlatch CLub26 total reviews
Comment from Lisasview
I love writing in Kyreille form... Found this form about 6 months ago... It is more difficult then it seems...right...
perhaps I will share mine one day....
Lisasview
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
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I love writing in Kyreille form... Found this form about 6 months ago... It is more difficult then it seems...right...
perhaps I will share mine one day....
Lisasview
Comment Written 01-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
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Lisasview, thanks for your sharing your discovery of the Kyreille form. I personally do enjoy the style. Surely, please do show your skill and thank you for doing so.
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent Kyrielle poem, talking about an old man's bones, you must be talking about me heh heh, beautifully written in tetrametric stanzas with a fine, articulate, smooth flowing narrative which is a.credit to you Jim, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
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This is an excellent Kyrielle poem, talking about an old man's bones, you must be talking about me heh heh, beautifully written in tetrametric stanzas with a fine, articulate, smooth flowing narrative which is a.credit to you Jim, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
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Roy, thank you. As always I do value your supportive comments. Hoping you week is going great! Jim
Comment from patcelaw
I can relate so much to your old bones. I am getting there too. As a matter fact, I have two broken bones right now that are in the process of healing a broken hairline fracture in my femur, and I also got a hairline fracture in my pelvis. Patricia
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
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I can relate so much to your old bones. I am getting there too. As a matter fact, I have two broken bones right now that are in the process of healing a broken hairline fracture in my femur, and I also got a hairline fracture in my pelvis. Patricia
Comment Written 01-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
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Thanks Patricia, I hope you mending well, I?m getting a full knee replacement at the end of the month ? getting old sure isn?t for sissies!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi JLR.
This is a good kyrielle for the Potlatch Club. This reminds us what most often come with aging. I have not quite reached this stage, but am coming closer.
Keep writing and stay healthy and pain free.
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
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Hi JLR.
This is a good kyrielle for the Potlatch Club. This reminds us what most often come with aging. I have not quite reached this stage, but am coming closer.
Keep writing and stay healthy and pain free.
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 01-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
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Joan, stay as fit as humanly possible. It does matter as each new decade arrives, I?m getting a full knee replacement at the end of the month ? getting old sure isn?t for sissies! But I am so grateful to be fit enough at seventy three to get both knees done and get back in the game!
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I try my best, John. I am a decade younger than you and still have no knee problems. I have a little arthritis in the big toe of my right foot and that's about all. Maybe you can run a marathon after the surgery with a little training. HAha.
Joan
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Joan, I will begin training! Thanks Jim
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Tell me when you are ready to run your first marathon and I will root you on.
Joan
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This is certainly true for many of us here on FanStory. Still feeling such aches while I'm awake, has me raising my voice saying ... at times ... For goodness's sake; stop already, and then at times, lifting praise I'm still alive.
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
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This is certainly true for many of us here on FanStory. Still feeling such aches while I'm awake, has me raising my voice saying ... at times ... For goodness's sake; stop already, and then at times, lifting praise I'm still alive.
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
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Amen, brother!
Comment from Bill Schott
This kyrielle, These Old Bones, has the proper formatting and finds that the aches may be masked, but they are exposed again and resume their place as reality.
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This kyrielle, These Old Bones, has the proper formatting and finds that the aches may be masked, but they are exposed again and resume their place as reality.
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
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Bill yep some reality huh?
