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Travelin' Rosie

Rhyming verse

43 total reviews 
Comment from June Sargent
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What a sweet tribute to your granddaughter! I can picture her roaming around until she's suddenly picked up by her dad. Isn't it great to be a grandmother??? Famijy is everything.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Thank you June. I am enjoying being a grandmother and this sweet age is so fun and adorable. She just found out how to pat her hand on her mouth and go... ba ba ba. I melt every time she does it :)

    Melissa
Comment from Boogienights
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My granddaughter hannah will turn one on March 2nd. Everything you talk about in your poem I have experienced. It brings me endless joy to watch her, I appreciate this great poem.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
    Thank you Sharon. I am loving being a part of her life, as I know you do for Hannah. Babies are so fun!!!

    Melissa
Comment from Aussie
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Congrats grandmother! A super artwork to compliment your poem written from your heart (I can see you smiling.) Pity they grow up. Now you have become an official babysitter. Go feel the love. K xx

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Thank you Kay. I hope to babysit... they live 1 1/2 hours away, so we don't get to do that often enough to suit us. So appreciate your words of wisdom.

    Melissa
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Awe. This was a sweet poem. I love how you captured the delight of Rosalie as she moves about. The world is such an inviting place for babies. They know no fear. Adventure waits everywhere. Gretchen

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Just so, Gretchen. Thank you. I really marvel at how quickly she learns things and develops... her newest thing is to pat her mouth and go ba ba ba. It melts my heart every time :). Hugs!

    Melissa
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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What a sweet tribute to your granddaughter, Rosalie.
You did a great job with the smooth flow and great rhymes,
Melissa. Your words were descriptive and created super
imagery. I could see her moving about and being lifted in
the air. The picture was adorable, too.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Jan... Thank you for your lovely review. I really marvel at how quickly she learns things and develops... her newest thing is to pat her mouth and go ba ba ba. It melts my heart every time :). Hugs!

    Melissa
Comment from jacquelyn popp
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Really cute poem. Well done. You had a great rhyming pattern throughout your whoe poem. Your word flow was nicely done. Really good imagery created in your writing by your verses that you wrote, and your descriptions. The artwork was adorable and cute, and went perfectly with your poem. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Jacquelyn... Thank you for your lovely review. I really marvel at how quickly she learns things and develops... her newest thing is to pat her mouth and go ba ba ba. It melts my heart every time :). Hugs!

    Melissa
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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What a treat it must be for a grandmother to experience all of these things happening for her own children as they learn the joys of parenthood.

A lovely poem that Rosalie will read some day and in it see a moment in her life.

Well done:-)

Pam

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Pam... Thank you for your lovely review. I really marvel at how quickly she learns things and develops... her newest thing is to pat her mouth and go ba ba ba. It melts my heart every time :). Hugs!

    Melissa
Comment from zanya
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This poem presents an endearing portrait of that delightful stage of development when a little one begins to explore life and surroundings- a beautiful evocation

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Zanya...Thank you for your lovely review. I really marvel at how quickly she learns things and develops... her newest thing is to pat her mouth and go ba ba ba. It melts my heart every time :). Hugs!

    Melissa
Comment from patcelaw
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This is an absolutely delightful poem about your granddaughter. I know she must be the love of your life and she sounds like she's a real cutie. Enjoy her as long as you can because she will grow up way too fast. God bless and have a good day Patricia.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
    Thank you Patricia... I definitely will take your advice to heart. I hope you have a lovely evening!!

    Melissa
reply by patcelaw on 02-Feb-2023
    When you look across the room and see your granddaughter smile, why not stop everything just to play with her a while for all too soon the years they take her to a distant place and Minnie will be the days you?ll love to see her face don?t let those precious years slip by until she?s grown to take some time to cherish her and make your love well known for as you strive to love her the way God wants you to your build such precious memories that she?ll show her love to you. This poem I wrote several Decades ago, after my girls were all grown. It took me about six minutes to ride the poem. I recite this often too young parents and grandparents when I see them as I?m out shopping or at church. Young parents today need some encouragement and that?s one way that I can help encourage them. It also holds true for young grandmothers.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Cherished memories. Gotta love them. Now how old is Rosalie? Or is this a grandbaby? ..................................................................................................................................................................

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
    Hello Tom. Thank you for your lovely review! This is our one and only grandchild at the moment... she makes my heart melt. She turned one on New Year's Day.

    Melissa