Stay Present
Mindfulness at its finest- a reminder to live in the NOW25 total reviews
Comment from Marienkiefer
Nice crafted live in the moment perspective poem.
What works in your writing is that you offer insight into people's choices or atttitudes.
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Nice crafted live in the moment perspective poem.
What works in your writing is that you offer insight into people's choices or atttitudes.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much!! That reflection and feedback means more than you know.
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Thank you so much!! That reflection and feedback means more than you know.
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Thank you so much!! That reflection and feedback means more than you know.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I like your opening lines with the progression of time.
-They are followed with good examples in the second line.
-Each concluding line shows the impact that progresses
from never changing to time wasted, and finally
a good message about still having living left to do.
-A very good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I like your opening lines with the progression of time.
-They are followed with good examples in the second line.
-Each concluding line shows the impact that progresses
from never changing to time wasted, and finally
a good message about still having living left to do.
-A very good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much!!!! I appreciate you taking our time to write me such detailed feedback. Noted and appreciated big time! <3
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Thank you so much!!!! I appreciate you taking our time to write me such detailed feedback. Noted and appreciated big time! <3
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Thank you so much!!!! I appreciate you taking our time to write me such detailed feedback. Noted and appreciated big time! <3
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You are very welcome, and I appreciate your reply!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are so true. These words have a strong message.
Living in the moment and being aware are so important to me. As the
author states in the last stanza "The Moment"! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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The author's words are so true. These words have a strong message.
Living in the moment and being aware are so important to me. As the
author states in the last stanza "The Moment"! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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I appreciate so much you taking time to leave this feedback. I love the specifics when sharing about your favorite parts. Thank you!!
Comment from Faith Williams
A wonderful reminder to live in the here and now, to not dwell on the past which you cannot change, and to not dwell in the future when it is not here yet. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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A wonderful reminder to live in the here and now, to not dwell on the past which you cannot change, and to not dwell in the future when it is not here yet. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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I appreciate that so much! I agree, right now is all we have! Thanks so much for reflecting on this with me! <3
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good message. The text is easily seen. The presentation is done well. The 3rd line of verse two needs to be stated more clearly. The word guess at the end doesn't quite makes sense. Maybe put} Time spent here wasted; let it rest. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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This is a good message. The text is easily seen. The presentation is done well. The 3rd line of verse two needs to be stated more clearly. The word guess at the end doesn't quite makes sense. Maybe put} Time spent here wasted; let it rest. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your constructive feedback! I always appreciate those comments and suggestions so much.
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You are welcome!
