Why is it so?
A Philosophical poem. Beautifully67 total reviews
Comment from Pangalactic
A good summary of man's short comings. Why is there so much judgment? It's this built into our generic makeup? I think not. It seems simple to me: love first, don't judge, think of everybody as relatives - because we are.
There's much wisdom in your words here; a great piece of wise writing. I'd give a six of I had one
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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A good summary of man's short comings. Why is there so much judgment? It's this built into our generic makeup? I think not. It seems simple to me: love first, don't judge, think of everybody as relatives - because we are.
There's much wisdom in your words here; a great piece of wise writing. I'd give a six of I had one
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thanks for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
The words of the pop song "The Living Years" came to mind as I read this:
"Every generation blames the one before . . . ." (stanza 1 of poem especially). The next generation will blame ours! As your skillfully written, expressive poem says, we fail to gain wisdom while making our judgments if we fail to love others and rely on God.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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The words of the pop song "The Living Years" came to mind as I read this:
"Every generation blames the one before . . . ." (stanza 1 of poem especially). The next generation will blame ours! As your skillfully written, expressive poem says, we fail to gain wisdom while making our judgments if we fail to love others and rely on God.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thanks Janice, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Roy: keep dancing my friend! Many people are treated unfairly.
We have battlefields in Minnesota - due to the death of George Floyd.
Women are treated as secretaries with the same degree as men who
become bosses in marketing. I know, they did this to me. We have
our stories, that's why we write. Keep being a voice and pray for Ukraine. Gods got this! flylikeaneagle Stars for you! *****************
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Roy: keep dancing my friend! Many people are treated unfairly.
We have battlefields in Minnesota - due to the death of George Floyd.
Women are treated as secretaries with the same degree as men who
become bosses in marketing. I know, they did this to me. We have
our stories, that's why we write. Keep being a voice and pray for Ukraine. Gods got this! flylikeaneagle Stars for you! *****************
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thanks Nancy, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Roy.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with effective images and rhyme.
-It's interesting, my poem for this week is called "What If."
-A very good opening verse.
-This is one of your very good lines:
"Are we so thick that we don't know,
that loving ALL will make life flow?"
-The last two verses have very good
messages, making an effective conclusion.
-Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Roy.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with effective images and rhyme.
-It's interesting, my poem for this week is called "What If."
-A very good opening verse.
-This is one of your very good lines:
"Are we so thick that we don't know,
that loving ALL will make life flow?"
-The last two verses have very good
messages, making an effective conclusion.
-Well done!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thanks Pam, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
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You are very welcome, Roy.
Comment from Boogienights
I love the ideas presented in this poem, of how people should but are not conducting themselves. It flows beautifully and makes the reader stop and think. Thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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I love the ideas presented in this poem, of how people should but are not conducting themselves. It flows beautifully and makes the reader stop and think. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thanks for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Charity Stewart
This poem is really spectacular. The flow is very nice and the poem is just the right length. I love the background picture as it relates to your poem. You mention God a lot in your poems. Are you spiritual? You are a great poet! Keep writing
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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This poem is really spectacular. The flow is very nice and the poem is just the right length. I love the background picture as it relates to your poem. You mention God a lot in your poems. Are you spiritual? You are a great poet! Keep writing
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thanks Charity, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from John Ciarmello
Wonderful as usual, my friend Roy. Your flow and mastery of rhyme is incredible. I always enjoy your work. The artwork here is gorgeous. thanks for the read.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Wonderful as usual, my friend Roy. Your flow and mastery of rhyme is incredible. I always enjoy your work. The artwork here is gorgeous. thanks for the read.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thanks John, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from zanya
How enlightening to engage with some philosophical thought as these stanzas enable us to do - the big questions still linger there in the shadows whatever else may be claiming our attention - thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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How enlightening to engage with some philosophical thought as these stanzas enable us to do - the big questions still linger there in the shadows whatever else may be claiming our attention - thanks for sharing
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thanks Zanya, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from poetwatch
Hi, Roy, we as a people are all the same, we all bleed when our heart is cut and die a thousand verbal deaths, we cry as our loved ones fade away, yet they still live in our hearts. We are the same you and I invisible to the arrogant, but we are the same except not arrogant. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Hi, Roy, we as a people are all the same, we all bleed when our heart is cut and die a thousand verbal deaths, we cry as our loved ones fade away, yet they still live in our hearts. We are the same you and I invisible to the arrogant, but we are the same except not arrogant. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from jessizero
We tend to judge others in different lands or different times even though we aren't always right. Thank you for sharing this with us. Keep up the good work. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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We tend to judge others in different lands or different times even though we aren't always right. Thank you for sharing this with us. Keep up the good work. Best wishes.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
