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Those summer roses

Modern haiku

25 total reviews 
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Exceptional
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A beautifully crafted poem accompanied by a lovely painting of the flower. That alluring scent and lovely petals of the rose are loved by many, but there is a pain in beauty at times, and the rose is proof of it. Well done! Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
    I am sorry for replying late .Crackers are already being burst and this has flared up my asthma.it is going to be worse by Diwali.
    Thank you very much for your encouragement and these stars have cheered me up
reply by Seshadri_Sreenivasan on 29-Oct-2021
    Take it easy. Don't bother about delays in replying. Not so important. Take care and keep the nebuliser handy.God Bless!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Excellent
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I like this short piece, termed as a modern haiku.
Its format of 7-4-7-3 is new to me as a modern haiku but you have
written this well. It describes how the lure of a perfect rose can really
have a prickly effect for the admirer. Ouch! I enjoyed this nice poem.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
    Thank you very much for your encouraging words. Thank you.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent
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This modern Haiku poetry speaks about those dainty summer roses entice heart and they tempt your hands to gather them though their thorns are sharp; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this, happy reviewing this; God Bless you, my good writer, post more, dear. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
    Thank you very much for your encouraging review.sorry my reply was delayed.
Comment from royowen
Excellent
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Oh yes indeed we really should remember that the rose, though one of the most beautiful adornments of creation, has indeed thorns, reminding us that that beauty has a metaphoric attraction and yet danger. Beautifully written, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 25-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
    Thank you very much for your encouragement and understanding review. Sorry my reply was delayed .
reply by royowen on 29-Oct-2021
    Most welcome
Comment from Carlos' girl
Excellent
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Oooh this is a pretty poem. The pink background and illustration tops it off nicely. Love the words dainty and entice; they paint a picture I can see and so your Haiku is successful.

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 Comment Written 25-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
    Thank you very much for your kind words.
reply by Carlos' girl on 29-Oct-2021
    Most welcome