Into the Quiet
Six Word Poem: Imagine the possibilities...45 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
Six short words but they describe the perfect relationship, two hearts that beat as one, loving each other unconditionally, each one wanting what is best for the other.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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Six short words but they describe the perfect relationship, two hearts that beat as one, loving each other unconditionally, each one wanting what is best for the other.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Anne,
My apologies for my late reply = nasty virus!
Thank you!
diane
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You are welcome. Hope you are feeling better
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Into the Quiet", is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
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"Into the Quiet", is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
Comment from Wendy G
What a beautiful image and six meaningful words. Well thought through to have rhymes and near rhyme as well. Best wishes for your entry in the contest. Wendy
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What a beautiful image and six meaningful words. Well thought through to have rhymes and near rhyme as well. Best wishes for your entry in the contest. Wendy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
Comment from Midi O'Rourke
What a lovely way to use six words. I will remember this one. Anyway, it is a wonderful contest entry. Should be a winner. Hear that FS voters! Good luck in the contest!
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What a lovely way to use six words. I will remember this one. Anyway, it is a wonderful contest entry. Should be a winner. Hear that FS voters! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
Comment from Boogienights
This is a lovely thought...but even without condemnations there still may be no shared connection if two people are so far apart in their way of thinking. At least a conversation could get started. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
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This is a lovely thought...but even without condemnations there still may be no shared connection if two people are so far apart in their way of thinking. At least a conversation could get started. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did an awesome job with your contest entry, Diane. I love the picture. Your words are precise in their description, the rhymes work, the formatting of lines is great, and your message is clear. The color scheme is beautiful, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
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You did an awesome job with your contest entry, Diane. I love the picture. Your words are precise in their description, the rhymes work, the formatting of lines is great, and your message is clear. The color scheme is beautiful, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
Comment from karenina
I've got to admit, as much as the thought of six words meeting the threshold of poetry seems, for me, impossible...
You've managed it nicely! I think not only the worlds have to be perfectly chosen--the image selected, the font and alignment all come together to turn such brevity into poetry!
Nice!
Karenina
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I've got to admit, as much as the thought of six words meeting the threshold of poetry seems, for me, impossible...
You've managed it nicely! I think not only the worlds have to be perfectly chosen--the image selected, the font and alignment all come together to turn such brevity into poetry!
Nice!
Karenina
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You've got that right. When you have a person near you who respects your silence, it is the soulmate that you dream of. As always, nicely done.
Raffaelina
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You've got that right. When you have a person near you who respects your silence, it is the soulmate that you dream of. As always, nicely done.
Raffaelina
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
Those few words speak much louder than one would think. To not condemn people brings us closer together which connects us one and all. Good job!
Patty
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Those few words speak much louder than one would think. To not condemn people brings us closer together which connects us one and all. Good job!
Patty
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Into the Quiet
by Mrs. KT
Nice presentation. It's hard to find good friends that share contemplation and way to see things. It's a beautiful thing. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy hugs
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Into the Quiet
by Mrs. KT
Nice presentation. It's hard to find good friends that share contemplation and way to see things. It's a beautiful thing. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
