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Enchanter

triad

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Comment from Sherry Asbury
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I have always found them to be referred to as female...but who knows...men certainly try to trap pretty girls. An interesting and titillating tale and a question for pondering - well done.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
    Thank you .
reply by Sherry Asbury on 08-Sep-2021
    You are most welcome!!
Comment from SHABAMO
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This was great! I love that you turned the siren example on its head. I would say historically the number of female sailors was so low that's probably why it was one way. Plus women were seen as the evil seductresses.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
    Thank you very much .yes that would be the reason why the wrote only about female sirens...
Comment from RodG
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I like the artwork and the premise of your poem very much. But choosing an AAA BBB CCC rhyme scheme was not a wise idea. It's hard to find three successive rhymes that aren't contrived. Lines two and six are good examples of what I mean.

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 Comment Written 06-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
    Thank you for stopping by. This was a club event asking for mono rhymed triplets.metre at the discretion of the poet.
Comment from Carlos' girl
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Yes good point made in notes; can't sirens also be males? ( same w boats names and hurricanes). Well your poem is good the rhymes flow and illustration is good choice

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 Comment Written 06-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
    Thank you very much.
reply by Carlos' girl on 08-Sep-2021
    So welcome