Sweet Talk
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Comment from amahra
Ah, this was so sweet. And a great 80-word Flash Fiction entry. It had just the right choice of words and tone. The image you chose for your writing is not only stunning by complimentary to the fiction. Great job!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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Ah, this was so sweet. And a great 80-word Flash Fiction entry. It had just the right choice of words and tone. The image you chose for your writing is not only stunning by complimentary to the fiction. Great job!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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Thank You!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, I think all of need a little sweet talking every now and then, but for some of us, even hello would sound like it came from a French romance novel. LOL. Thanks for sharing. I wish I had a six.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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Yes, I think all of need a little sweet talking every now and then, but for some of us, even hello would sound like it came from a French romance novel. LOL. Thanks for sharing. I wish I had a six.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Theodora Hamelin
Oh, how this hit home! A little "sweet talk" satisfies the deepest yearning. I love the image, too. It is evocative of the mood one is in when hoping for some sweet talk. Well done, Brenda.
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Oh, how this hit home! A little "sweet talk" satisfies the deepest yearning. I love the image, too. It is evocative of the mood one is in when hoping for some sweet talk. Well done, Brenda.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
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Comment from Pantygynt
I thought this was an enjoyable write with a touch of underlying humour of a somewhat sarcastic nature. It doesn't sound as if you are in receipt of what you consider to be your quota of the stuff.
MS Word's counter comes up with a total of 78 words so this squeaks in to the allowable bracket of 78-82.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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I thought this was an enjoyable write with a touch of underlying humour of a somewhat sarcastic nature. It doesn't sound as if you are in receipt of what you consider to be your quota of the stuff.
MS Word's counter comes up with a total of 78 words so this squeaks in to the allowable bracket of 78-82.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
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Comment from lyenochka
Those would always be great words to hear! I wonder if you capitalized "He" for emphasis? Perhaps a bold or italics might have an equal effect. Often the capitalized "He" is used to refer to God. He does love us.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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Those would always be great words to hear! I wonder if you capitalized "He" for emphasis? Perhaps a bold or italics might have an equal effect. Often the capitalized "He" is used to refer to God. He does love us.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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Thank You! You're right. I did do it for emphasis. Without God there is no Love. And you're so right. Nobody loves us better than Him!
Comment from Theodore McDowell
such a longing for intimacy and feeling like you are valuable and cherished, Underlying this desire for closeness is a lingering loneliness and alienation from the lover. well done in such a short piece,
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021
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such a longing for intimacy and feeling like you are valuable and cherished, Underlying this desire for closeness is a lingering loneliness and alienation from the lover. well done in such a short piece,
Comment Written 28-Jun-2021
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Comment from lancellot
Well, we know what this person needs and wants to hear. Very strong message and one I think both men and woman could agree on. Everyone wants to be and feel wanted sometimes.
Good work
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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021
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Well, we know what this person needs and wants to hear. Very strong message and one I think both men and woman could agree on. Everyone wants to be and feel wanted sometimes.
Good work
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2021
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Comment from kahpot
Very well said, everyone needs to hear those words that assure and comfort us, a wonderful read, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021
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Very well said, everyone needs to hear those words that assure and comfort us, a wonderful read, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2021
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