Vacant
a villanelle25 total reviews
Comment from bhogg
Well done. I know nothing about this form, but am certain you are probably on form. Such a good decision to not accompany with any art-work, given the subject. The start white on black seems perfect.
Nothing more comes to mine for me to tell
After all, I'm reading a vacant villanelle
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Well done. I know nothing about this form, but am certain you are probably on form. Such a good decision to not accompany with any art-work, given the subject. The start white on black seems perfect.
Nothing more comes to mine for me to tell
After all, I'm reading a vacant villanelle
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, blogger, for the great review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with a complex style, Mystery Author. Your color scheme and lack of image work well. Your rhymes are great and there's good flow. Your message is clear--yes there are times when nothing comes to mind to write and share. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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You did a great job with a complex style, Mystery Author. Your color scheme and lack of image work well. Your rhymes are great and there's good flow. Your message is clear--yes there are times when nothing comes to mind to write and share. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Jan
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
How very true this can be when we seem to draw a blank. But you have not, as this clever poem describes what you are not lacking, creativity! Excellent work!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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How very true this can be when we seem to draw a blank. But you have not, as this clever poem describes what you are not lacking, creativity! Excellent work!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Kerry. It*s good to get a shot in the arm once in awhile.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A well written "vacant villanelle."
-Effective meter, imagery, and rhyme.
-A clever topic and good repeating lines.
-My favorite images are
"liquid thoughts refuse to gel"
and "no fragrant flowers in the dell."
-A very good entry; good luck.
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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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-A well written "vacant villanelle."
-Effective meter, imagery, and rhyme.
-A clever topic and good repeating lines.
-My favorite images are
"liquid thoughts refuse to gel"
and "no fragrant flowers in the dell."
-A very good entry; good luck.
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Pam, for the kind review.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Bettyanne Twigg
I liked your poem for no reason that I can tell. It is simply...appealing. Thank you for sharing. Nice to have no picture, too. Will watch for your work in the future. Stay active and safe.
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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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I liked your poem for no reason that I can tell. It is simply...appealing. Thank you for sharing. Nice to have no picture, too. Will watch for your work in the future. Stay active and safe.
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Bettyanne
