Letter to God
I communicate with God in many ways.36 total reviews
Comment from amada
"Help me to know what is right or wrong...." This is a poem that leads to much thinking and introspection. In these troublesome covid days we are under terrible pressure...
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
"Help me to know what is right or wrong...." This is a poem that leads to much thinking and introspection. In these troublesome covid days we are under terrible pressure...
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this kind review. This was a pleasure to write and I will keeping on doing this to keep my prayers focused. You are correct about our troubled time of the virus.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from l.raven
every word written so very true...
everything we do, is done through God's loving hands...
He leads us through our journey...with love and kindness...
I love your poem/letter to God...
so very nicely written...and your picture...perfect...
good luck in the contest...it's a wonderful poem...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
every word written so very true...
everything we do, is done through God's loving hands...
He leads us through our journey...with love and kindness...
I love your poem/letter to God...
so very nicely written...and your picture...perfect...
good luck in the contest...it's a wonderful poem...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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I do appreciate your read and your take on my poem/letter is right on the money. I try but often fail in faith but am not giving up.
Thank you for your nice review.
Anon
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please don't give up...because God will never give up on you...when you have a problem put it in His hands...and truly walk away from it...He does do miracles...
and you are so welcome...love xxoo
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big smiles back at you...xxoo
Comment from Boogienights
I love this, it's beautifully written and expresses what I believe to be your true feelings. It truly is wonderful when you live life with such a strong faith. In the second line of your poem, did you mean to write the twice? "The letter will soar up to the the sky". Thanks for sharing.:)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
I love this, it's beautifully written and expresses what I believe to be your true feelings. It truly is wonderful when you live life with such a strong faith. In the second line of your poem, did you mean to write the twice? "The letter will soar up to the the sky". Thanks for sharing.:)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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I do appreciate your read and your take on my poem/letter is right on the money. I try but often fail in faith but am not giving up.
Thank you for your nice review.
Thank you for catching this; I did not mean to write "the" twice.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry, Mystery Author, is in good form. I like the way you approached the theme. Your letter is one that shows the positive relationship one has with God even when obstacles are in the way. He is always there and all need to praise Him more. Your art choice works well with your well-chosen words. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
Your contest entry, Mystery Author, is in good form. I like the way you approached the theme. Your letter is one that shows the positive relationship one has with God even when obstacles are in the way. He is always there and all need to praise Him more. Your art choice works well with your well-chosen words. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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I do appreciate your read and your take on my poem/letter is right on the money. I try but often fail in faith but am not giving up.
Thank you for your nice review.
Anon
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
you captured my attention from the first lie to the last and they were so touching and from the heart
thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
you captured my attention from the first lie to the last and they were so touching and from the heart
thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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I do appreciate your read and your take on my poem/letter is right on the money. I try but often fail in faith but am not giving up.
Thank you for your nice review.
Anon
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your very welcome keep the faith and stay on praying ground
cookie
Comment from Reese Turner
Prayer by mail. Well, why not. It is private, very personal, very sincere and being in writing makes it officially documented. Great idea! Enjoyed reading your thoughts and thanks.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
Prayer by mail. Well, why not. It is private, very personal, very sincere and being in writing makes it officially documented. Great idea! Enjoyed reading your thoughts and thanks.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Yes, it is private unless it's on FS. Glad you enjoyed it.
Anon
Comment from royowen
There's one thing I know about God, we can't con Him, He sees if we have faith or not, He reads hearts, we try to read mind, we have no idea how our hearts work, but He does. Well done, and excellent entry in this contest. In no set meter, but aabb rhyming, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
There's one thing I know about God, we can't con Him, He sees if we have faith or not, He reads hearts, we try to read mind, we have no idea how our hearts work, but He does. Well done, and excellent entry in this contest. In no set meter, but aabb rhyming, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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I do appreciate your read and your take on my poem/letter is right on the money. I try but often fail in faith but am not giving up. I find this aabb easy so I use it a lot.
Thank you for your nice review.
Anon
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Well done
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the A Poem about God writing prompt contest. You followed the rules of the contest well. You used descriptive words and excellent imagery.
A very spiritual poem with a message of God's love.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the A Poem about God writing prompt contest. You followed the rules of the contest well. You used descriptive words and excellent imagery.
A very spiritual poem with a message of God's love.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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I do appreciate your read and your take on my poem/letter is right on the money. I try but often fail in faith but am not giving up.
Thank you for your nice review.
Anon
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a very beautifully written letter to God. Nice flow and rhyme scheme. Depiction of good strong faith in your words. I like this closing, I know my faith in you is sure, help me keep faithful and make me pure. Tomorrow, I promise to try my very best, to be invited, in time, as a Heavenly guest. Unequivocally yours from birth till death! Your humble servant. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
This is a very beautifully written letter to God. Nice flow and rhyme scheme. Depiction of good strong faith in your words. I like this closing, I know my faith in you is sure, help me keep faithful and make me pure. Tomorrow, I promise to try my very best, to be invited, in time, as a Heavenly guest. Unequivocally yours from birth till death! Your humble servant. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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I do appreciate your read and your take on my poem/letter is right on the money. I try but often fail in faith but am not giving up.
Thank you for your nice review.
Anon
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Your welcome
Comment from Erika Seshadri
This is very well written. Quite an enjoyable, easy read. I have no constructive criticism to offer. I see it's an entry in the Poem about God contest. All the best of luck.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
This is very well written. Quite an enjoyable, easy read. I have no constructive criticism to offer. I see it's an entry in the Poem about God contest. All the best of luck.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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I do appreciate your read and your take on my poem/letter is right on the money. I try but often fail in faith but am not giving up.
Thank you for your nice review.
Anon