The Twelve Days of Chaos
Can't catch a break27 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Awesome!very clever I love it. You did a great job here rewriting 12 days of Christmas. The pink slip and everything else fitting in well. Great photo to go with your poem. Merry Christmas. ð???
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Awesome!very clever I love it. You did a great job here rewriting 12 days of Christmas. The pink slip and everything else fitting in well. Great photo to go with your poem. Merry Christmas. ð???
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you, I'm glad you like it. You and your family have a merry Christmas. :)
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You too 🙂
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun epic write and very inventive and unfortunately will be true in some households and work is short and bills are piling up! You made me smile, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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This is a fun epic write and very inventive and unfortunately will be true in some households and work is short and bills are piling up! You made me smile, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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You're probably right about that( except for the rancid squirrels). Thank you for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Oh, may this one it's a humorous tuffy but I like it:"On the twelth day of Christmas, this shit all gave to me,
one nervous breakdown,
no help from my dad,
son's still in jail,
Notice of foreclosure,
signed divorce papers,
squirrels have gone rancid,
riding a bike now,
FIVE OVERDUE BILLS!
four bags of dog's poop,
three letters to Santa,
my bitch ex-wife's list,
and of course, my pink slip still hangs in the treeeee"
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Oh, may this one it's a humorous tuffy but I like it:"On the twelth day of Christmas, this shit all gave to me,
one nervous breakdown,
no help from my dad,
son's still in jail,
Notice of foreclosure,
signed divorce papers,
squirrels have gone rancid,
riding a bike now,
FIVE OVERDUE BILLS!
four bags of dog's poop,
three letters to Santa,
my bitch ex-wife's list,
and of course, my pink slip still hangs in the treeeee"
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thanks for reading my poem. It was a little hard to keep track of everything, but it was fun. :)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
What a hoot!
I think I prefer your parody of "The Twelve Days of Christmas" to the original! Rancid squirrels, eh? Whew! You've some imagination!
Well, let's hope next year's twelve days will be more positive for you!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer!
What a hoot!
I think I prefer your parody of "The Twelve Days of Christmas" to the original! Rancid squirrels, eh? Whew! You've some imagination!
Well, let's hope next year's twelve days will be more positive for you!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thanks for reading my poem...this was a fun contest to enter, I enjoyed it. Hope you and your family have a lovely holiday. :)
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And the same to you!
diane
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Oh, this one is a sad and hilarious all at the same time... but what a great answer to the contest calling here! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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LOL!! Oh, this one is a sad and hilarious all at the same time... but what a great answer to the contest calling here! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you. I wasn't quite sure what to do, and sometimes I got lost on where I was at on the list. It was fun though. Thanks for reading. :)
Comment from DragonSkulls
Hahahaha. What a 12 days to have. I like the squirrels going rancid. LOL. Plus, the son in jail. The whole thing was great. Thank you for jumping in my ridiculous contest, author. You're missing "slip" in your second stanza. I wish you the best of luck in the voting. Hopefully the contest won't be recycled numerous times from no one joining. We'll see. Thank you again. This was a great entry.
DS
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Hahahaha. What a 12 days to have. I like the squirrels going rancid. LOL. Plus, the son in jail. The whole thing was great. Thank you for jumping in my ridiculous contest, author. You're missing "slip" in your second stanza. I wish you the best of luck in the voting. Hopefully the contest won't be recycled numerous times from no one joining. We'll see. Thank you again. This was a great entry.
DS
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you for this positive review. I'm surprised that more spots aren't taken yet, it's a fun contest. I got lost a couple of times about where I was on the list. Thanks for reading and correcting my mistake, and for creating this contest. I hope you and your family have a happy holiday. :)
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Just so you know, one of the rules is no author notes. I know they are harmless but the committee will hold up the contest from going to booth because of it. Can I get you to delete them off of there? Than you.
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Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a very cute and humorous response to the writing challenge. I enjoyed reading it all, and I especially liked the pink slip and the divorce papers. Good luck in the voting.
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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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This is a very cute and humorous response to the writing challenge. I enjoyed reading it all, and I especially liked the pink slip and the divorce papers. Good luck in the voting.
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thanks so much for reading. I'm not sure i did it according to the rules, but it was fun.:)
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You are welcome. If you would be so kind, could you possible review my current piece "A fruitful session?" It is a short one.
