Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

What a lovely birthday poem for Barbara! This would work perfectly for a birthday card to cheer and celebrate birthdays and our uniqueness instead of dreading the aging.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you, Helen, for dropping by to read and review my presentation. Both greatly appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Happy Birthday, Barbara
by Jannypan (Jan)

Hello, Jan,

I wrote the second chapter, after Katherine and now there are more than a dozen. It's a great present for Barbara. She will love yours. I like the Rhyme and meter. The presentation is beautiful.

Hugs,

Gypsy

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you, Gypsy, for taking time to review my presentation. Greatly appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from Loren .

Excellent

A fine and fun tribute to Barbara, how can she not feel honored and a bit humbled and blessed with this. I kept thinking, too, a birthday is certainly something to celebrate, especially if one considers the alternative. This should be framed, it's that good. Loren

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you for your great review and comments. BOth greatly appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a wonderful tribute to Barbara, Jan and I enjoyed your uplifting birthday wishes, great rhymes and upbeat theme here. Birthdays are meant to be celebrated without tears, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you, Dolly, for tking time to read & review. Both greatly appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

A very well composed poem for Barbara's birthday. The flowers in this picture are exquisite. A grand birthday card for Barbara. I'm sure this would be beyond pleasing.

Ralf




I'm hear to say,

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you, Ralf, for dropping in with a great review. Much appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Jan, Blessings for Barbara, is a very beautiful and well written birthday poem for Barbara. You used very tender and heart felt words with very lovely imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you, Teri. I appreciate your time and great review.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

Thank you Jan for this lovely addition to the book. I think the full end rhymes for each line of a verse are really speciial, and I also really enjoy the rare pearl image.
Stay Safe
Katherine

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thank you so much, Katherine. Are the colors and font size ok?
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from aryr

Excellent

Great job, Jan. It was so nice of you to wish Barbara a happy birthday. I liked the picture choice, roses are beautiful and there really isn't anyone who appreciates them (unless it is someone who is allergic). Good background and font coloring.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020

Thank you, aryr, for dropping in with a great review.
Means much to me.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson

Excellent

I wished her a Happy Birthday already but once more will not hurt
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
Enjoy your day for every friend.
Cookie

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you, Miss Cookie, for dropping by with a great review. Much appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This birthday poem, Happy Birthday, Barbara, is a great message of taking stock in one's accomplishments and looking forward to a bright future. Nice.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you for taking time to read 7 review. Much appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan