The Joy of a Peppered Pickle
a modified Peppered Pickle40 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
"The Joy of a Peppered Pickle", is a well-written and fun piece. I'm not a peppered pickle fan but I can and did enjoy your entertaining poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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"The Joy of a Peppered Pickle", is a well-written and fun piece. I'm not a peppered pickle fan but I can and did enjoy your entertaining poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from estory
Well, I would say, that's food for thought. I liked how you described the peppered pickles, the spicy ness of them, and I also liked this link between the food and how it nourishes us, how it feeds the brain. I think you would like the poetry of Lina Parsons Marion, who is writing from the Blue Ridge Mountains in west Tennessee. Her book This Shaky Earth, is right up your alley. estory
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Well, I would say, that's food for thought. I liked how you described the peppered pickles, the spicy ness of them, and I also liked this link between the food and how it nourishes us, how it feeds the brain. I think you would like the poetry of Lina Parsons Marion, who is writing from the Blue Ridge Mountains in west Tennessee. Her book This Shaky Earth, is right up your alley. estory
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Therese Caron
What a fun poem to read! You used wonderful phrases such as prickling senses, relieves your ire, and spices mind. You did a great job with your first try at this style. I enjoyed this poem and your image is perfect. Thanks for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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What a fun poem to read! You used wonderful phrases such as prickling senses, relieves your ire, and spices mind. You did a great job with your first try at this style. I enjoyed this poem and your image is perfect. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
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You earned it!
Comment from Ben B.
Well done, you the format of your structure perfectly. This is a rather complex format that has been developed. I'm not sure if I would personally eat something like this, I hate peppers ð???
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Well done, you the format of your structure perfectly. This is a rather complex format that has been developed. I'm not sure if I would personally eat something like this, I hate peppers ð???
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a nice use of a poem named after this veggie to praise the pickle.
It seems to be one of your favorite foods.
Nice choice of artwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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This is a nice use of a poem named after this veggie to praise the pickle.
It seems to be one of your favorite foods.
Nice choice of artwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
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Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
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Any time, EM.
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Comment from Andreea Ceplinschi
I like this form, it's very reminiscent of a limerick, or a fable in verse. What I wonder about is the construction "spices mind" - I'm not quite sure if you're using mind as a verb or as a noun. Overall, I think it works well and you have a nice, playful little poem here.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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I like this form, it's very reminiscent of a limerick, or a fable in verse. What I wonder about is the construction "spices mind" - I'm not quite sure if you're using mind as a verb or as a noun. Overall, I think it works well and you have a nice, playful little poem here.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review. "Spices" [mind] is meant as a verb.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"The Joy of a Peppered Pickle", is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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"The Joy of a Peppered Pickle", is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review. I am so glad you liked this new form - it's my first try at it.
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I must admit pickle has never appealed to me and I don't think it ever will. I enjoyed reading your poem though and I thought your writing flowed smoothly. A well written piece.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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I must admit pickle has never appealed to me and I don't think it ever will. I enjoyed reading your poem though and I thought your writing flowed smoothly. A well written piece.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Patty Palmer
I think you did a splendid job for the first try! I don't think it should matter if it's one or two syllables. What's an extra syllable among friends? LOL That's the fun part about this site, you can feel free to try new things without worrying if someone will poke fun at you. Keep on writing!!
Patty
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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I think you did a splendid job for the first try! I don't think it should matter if it's one or two syllables. What's an extra syllable among friends? LOL That's the fun part about this site, you can feel free to try new things without worrying if someone will poke fun at you. Keep on writing!!
Patty
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from ESOSTINE
Well composed and great rhythmic pace. The picture was equally valuable and perfectly marched the subject of the poem so much so that I started longing for the peppered pickle. Thanks for sharing your very creative work.
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Well composed and great rhythmic pace. The picture was equally valuable and perfectly marched the subject of the poem so much so that I started longing for the peppered pickle. Thanks for sharing your very creative work.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the exceptional review and the six stars. I am honored.
