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A limerick.20 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
That's great Roy ! Hilariously and futuristic! Why not? There will certainly be a fed up priest that will apply it ! A great job! Ahhhhhhhhhhhh! Thank you for your funny written lines!
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That's great Roy ! Hilariously and futuristic! Why not? There will certainly be a fed up priest that will apply it ! A great job! Ahhhhhhhhhhhh! Thank you for your funny written lines!
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Thanks Tony, for these excellent comments, and groovy review, blessings Roy
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Witty, witty, witty! Oh, those phones!, they do reveal so much! Yes, and then you have to confess. It is no secret anymore, the whole church is talking about it, oooh, painful for the man from Ballone.
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Witty, witty, witty! Oh, those phones!, they do reveal so much! Yes, and then you have to confess. It is no secret anymore, the whole church is talking about it, oooh, painful for the man from Ballone.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
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Thanks Marjon,, for these excellent comments, and groovy review, blessings Roy
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Welcome!
Comment from Cindy Decker
Roy,
I love the limerick! Wouldn't th are t be embarrassing! Lol. Your levity is wonderful , Roy. Nice, humorous photo.
Have a wonderful week and stay well.ð??·
I still wear my mask when I go out.
Blessings,
Cindy
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Roy,
I love the limerick! Wouldn't th are t be embarrassing! Lol. Your levity is wonderful , Roy. Nice, humorous photo.
Have a wonderful week and stay well.ð??·
I still wear my mask when I go out.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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We don?t have to here, so far under control here Cindy, May God protect you and yours, thank you dear girl, blessings Roy
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Glad you?re ok, Roy.
God bless all you love
Cindy
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You too Cindy
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This reminds me of a joke that I forgot, but your poem it's an interesting offering. So he went to church to atone for his sin of writingð??? thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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This reminds me of a joke that I forgot, but your poem it's an interesting offering. So he went to church to atone for his sin of writingð??? thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
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Thanks Iza for these excellent comments, and groovy review, blessings Roy
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This limerick serves to remind the reader that we ought to watch our words and deeds, because someone might be paying attention and spreading news of our deeds and words as well. I guess the last line has a few extra syllables. There might be another way to say that. Thanks for a smile!
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This limerick serves to remind the reader that we ought to watch our words and deeds, because someone might be paying attention and spreading news of our deeds and words as well. I guess the last line has a few extra syllables. There might be another way to say that. Thanks for a smile!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
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Thanks Chrystie, for these excellent comments, and groovy review, blessings Roy
Comment from lyenochka
I guess that's what is scary about the internet. So the priest already knew about what the confession would be because the priest found the iPhone first. Enjoyed your limerick, Roy!
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I guess that's what is scary about the internet. So the priest already knew about what the confession would be because the priest found the iPhone first. Enjoyed your limerick, Roy!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
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Thanks Helen, for these brilliant comments, and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Limerick. It seems our electronic devices are one ahead of us. We do so many unholy things and place it on our phones the priest knows before we ask forgiveness.
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A very well-written Limerick. It seems our electronic devices are one ahead of us. We do so many unholy things and place it on our phones the priest knows before we ask forgiveness.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
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Thanks Sandra, for these excellent comments, and groovy review, blessings Roy
Comment from equestrik
This is a clever little write! I enjoyed the humor and the art work was well chosen. This is fun. Nice job-perhaps without the picture, though, I would not have "gotten" it.
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This is a clever little write! I enjoyed the humor and the art work was well chosen. This is fun. Nice job-perhaps without the picture, though, I would not have "gotten" it.
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Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
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Thanks , for these excellent comments, and groovy review, blessings Roy
Comment from Leigha Winfrey
I absolutely love the humor in it, it's hard to make it not offensive, which I think you have done exceptionally well. Keep up the good work as well as the humor...
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I absolutely love the humor in it, it's hard to make it not offensive, which I think you have done exceptionally well. Keep up the good work as well as the humor...
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
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Thanks Leigha, for these excellent comments, and groovy review, blessings Roy
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Thank you for the awesome poem.
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My pleasure
Comment from Lucy de Welles
Oh my! He's.....!
Sweet limerick which re-enforces the old adage: "there's many a slip between the cup and the lip!"
Well done! Love the color.
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Oh my! He's.....!
Sweet limerick which re-enforces the old adage: "there's many a slip between the cup and the lip!"
Well done! Love the color.
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Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
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Thanks Lucy, for these brilliant comments, and review, blessings Roy
