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Comment from lyenochka
You're amazing to church out these chapters so fast! I get a feeling that something could happen between Cody and Abby. Maybe?
You don't even know me,do you. (space needed after comma)
After "Kreitz grunted." some spacing could be added in that paragraph.
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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You're amazing to church out these chapters so fast! I get a feeling that something could happen between Cody and Abby. Maybe?
You don't even know me,do you. (space needed after comma)
After "Kreitz grunted." some spacing could be added in that paragraph.
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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I'll go take a look at that spacing issue. Thank you, Helen, for pointing it out for me. :)
Blessings in this upcoming week,
Deb
