Chopin for a Little Girl
A remembrance of my childhood. Free verse20 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great memory shared, Marjon. I enjoyed reading it. Your words paint a lovely picture of the night, the music, the dance, and the sky. I like the 'chiffon cloud.' Your words flow smoothly like a dance to sweet music. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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This is a great memory shared, Marjon. I enjoyed reading it. Your words paint a lovely picture of the night, the music, the dance, and the sky. I like the 'chiffon cloud.' Your words flow smoothly like a dance to sweet music. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Jan, so nice to have read your review! Thank you.
Comment from royowen
Yes, there are memories, or moments in our lives that will never go away, with me it's always been mainly aroma, but of course the other is Sight and sound, and, of course they add up to déjà vu, I love this. Poetry is always a symphony in blue...or read, or pink, (my girls, including my granddaughter.) this is divine My friend. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Yes, there are memories, or moments in our lives that will never go away, with me it's always been mainly aroma, but of course the other is Sight and sound, and, of course they add up to déjà vu, I love this. Poetry is always a symphony in blue...or read, or pink, (my girls, including my granddaughter.) this is divine My friend. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Roy! Wow, once again a six star review. I am thrilled. Thank you.
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Well done Marjon.
Comment from Cindy Decker
Marjon,
I am very familiar with Chopin's Nocturne. I can hear it playing in my head as I imagine the little dancer extolling the beautiful nigh bestowed upon her. You've penned an excellent poem. I love the images and descriptions you have expressed.
Best wishes,
Cindy D
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Marjon,
I am very familiar with Chopin's Nocturne. I can hear it playing in my head as I imagine the little dancer extolling the beautiful nigh bestowed upon her. You've penned an excellent poem. I love the images and descriptions you have expressed.
Best wishes,
Cindy D
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Cindy, I am happy with your review. Thank you so much.
Comment from BethShelby
This is truly beautiful. You painted a beautiful pictures with your words. I can see that sky and hear that music. I feel as though I can smell those roses. The Poem is really appealing.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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This is truly beautiful. You painted a beautiful pictures with your words. I can see that sky and hear that music. I feel as though I can smell those roses. The Poem is really appealing.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much, Beth. A beautiful review.
Comment from ESOSTINE
Thanks dear for sharing your poem. I admired the manner in which you used colours to describe the sky and the imagery of creeping moon and rose sent as "the music tiptoed..."
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thanks dear for sharing your poem. I admired the manner in which you used colours to describe the sky and the imagery of creeping moon and rose sent as "the music tiptoed..."
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much for the review!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a lovely memory, Marjon, they are what keep our loved ones close to us. I could almost smell the scent of the roses. Chopin is a favourite of mine, too. You have some lovely imagery in your poem, and the way you described yourself as transparent, was fabulous. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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What a lovely memory, Marjon, they are what keep our loved ones close to us. I could almost smell the scent of the roses. Chopin is a favourite of mine, too. You have some lovely imagery in your poem, and the way you described yourself as transparent, was fabulous. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Sandra. A beautiful review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Chopin for a Little Girl
by Marjon van Bruggen
Hello, Marjon,
I love your poem about the memories you have of your mother playing piano...they are lovely. My mother died when I was ten years old. The presentation is beautiful.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Chopin for a Little Girl
by Marjon van Bruggen
Hello, Marjon,
I love your poem about the memories you have of your mother playing piano...they are lovely. My mother died when I was ten years old. The presentation is beautiful.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thanks a lot, Gypsy! So appreciated this review!
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
We're so sorry that we didn't have a 6â? review to give you. This truly is exceptional. Millie plays the harp so I can definitely relate to your childhood memories. Thank you for sharing this incredibly beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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We're so sorry that we didn't have a 6â? review to give you. This truly is exceptional. Millie plays the harp so I can definitely relate to your childhood memories. Thank you for sharing this incredibly beautiful poem.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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I thank you both for this beautiful review. The five stars are very welcome too!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
What a lovely poem depicting a precious childhood memory. Sometimes parents do not realized how much their own their loves/hobbies affect their children.
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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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What a lovely poem depicting a precious childhood memory. Sometimes parents do not realized how much their own their loves/hobbies affect their children.
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Rebecca, thank you so much for your review.
Comment from Margaret Bednar
A gorgeous memory of a night magically spent in a summer garden, mother's piano music drifting out into the moonlit yard, you spellbound. Gorgeous writing.
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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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A gorgeous memory of a night magically spent in a summer garden, mother's piano music drifting out into the moonlit yard, you spellbound. Gorgeous writing.
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Margaret, thanks a lot for your comment!